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很多请求单项过6分的学生都会败在写作上,写作常常是千年5,万年5.5。 除了诉苦压分的主观因素,真正的因素究竟是什么呢?辛达雅思代报带你深化分析。

  写作6分首先请求不能跑题。一旦跑题,也许5分都十分难,4.5分是常多见到的分数。其次,保证观点的证明能满意根本的逻辑,证明要充分。最终,不能呈现太多的语法过错,保证语句的准确性。下边, 辛达雅思给咱们列一列考生作文中的多见语法过错及犯错的因素。

  1. The quantity of women workers keep stable from 1985 to 1990.

  这个语句是小作文数据图中学生所写。此句显着有两个过错,一个是时态过错。小作文中假如数据是曩昔的,要选用一般曩昔时,所以此处要用kept.。第二个是动词 keep方法不对,这句话的主语是quantity。时态过错和主谓不共同是雅思考试写作和白话最多见的语法过错。

  2. With developing of economy, the environment had deteriorated.

  这儿用了一个with 介词+名词短语,想表达随同的概念。可是咱们要紧记介词后边能够加名词、名词短语、动名词,构成介词短语以便做状语或许定语。可是developing of economy词性有疑问。A of B是多见的表明所属的名词短语格式,翻译成B的 A, 这儿请求 A和B有必要都是名词。而developing 是形容词性质,所以应该改为 with the development of economy.。相同,咱们还能够把with替换成as, 可是值得注意的是as 是连词,连词后边要加语句,所以能够写成as the economy develops。

  3. Playing computer games waste parents’ hard-earned money.

  这句话是经典的主谓不共同的过错。主句是playing computer games 动名词做主语,所以谓语动词要用奇数加s。在写一个现在时的语句时,必定要注意主谓共同疑问。主语是否是可数名词奇数、不可数名词、动名词、不定式或是语句。假如是,而且语句中又没有运用神态动词,谓语动词要加s。

  4. There are many people believe studying abroad is a good choice.

  这句话之所以这么写,都是受汉语语意的影响。那“有”在英文中咱们用there be/ have 都是动词概念,所以形成语句多谓语动词,这儿的are/ believe/ is都是动词,可是语句believe 后边是个宾语从句,显着动词多了。

  5. Government should take immediate measures to protect our environment.

  可数名词不能单独运用。这儿government 是可数名词,所以在语句中要么用governments, 要么特指the government。

  6. University students receive training on job-related skills is necessary.

  又是一句读起来朗朗上口,受汉语语意影响的语句。这个语句中有 receive 和 is 两个动词,可是没有涉及到从句。university students receive training on job-related skills 已经是个完整的语句,所以要用方法主语从句 it is necessary that university students receive training on job-related skills.

  7. The number of female students in this university is higher than male students.

  对比成份要共同。这句前边主语是the number, 后边对比对象是male students,所以准确的方法是 The number of female students in this university is higher than the number of male students. 或许The number of female students in this university is higher than that of male students.

  8. Newspapers exert such tremendous influence that they cannot only bring about major changes to the lives of ordinary people but to the government’s decision.

  Both ...and/ not only…but also/ A and B都归于并列结构,前后连接成份要共同。这句not only 后边是动词短语,but后确是 to the government’s decision。所以咱们能够改成Newspapers exert such tremendous influence that they cannot only bring about major changes to the lives of ordinary people but affect the government’s decision。

  9. Although teenagers may be included in family decisions, but they are not ultimately responsible.

  这个语句的过错在雅思白话中常多见到,也是受汉语语意影响,可是在英语中although和but都是连词,在语句中只能有一个。相同because和so也是一个道理。

  10. Which kinds of knowledge and skills should universities provide has been argued for many years.

  语序过错。主语从句,宾语从句都能够用疑问词what/which/ whether 等引导,但必定要记住,后边加正常语序的语句。should universities provide 语序过错,应该是which kinds of knowledge and skills universities should provide has been argued for many years,是which kinds of 引导的主语从句。






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