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随着考生对雅思考试复习备考的深入，就呈现了所谓雅思写作高分“模板”，指雅思写作中的一些固定的套句及其结构。很多同学甚至对雅思写作“模 板”这个概念顶礼膜拜，更有甚者会把雅思写作以为是一个背模板的进程，只需背点模板，雅思写作获得高分就没有什么问题了。然而事实证明，很多考生在考场上 生硬地使用所谓的雅思写作模板之后，带来的却是意想不到的低分后果，那么怎么突破雅思写作模板获高分?

　　在这篇文章中，辛达雅思代报小编将着重剖析怎么消除双方结构的模板痕迹。众所周知，双方结构首要有两个方面的特征：考题文字中的观念双向和考生对观念支撑视点的双方评论，但最好不要不置可否，应该有明确的单一指向性的观念倾向。

　　同样地，关于判断作文的结构类型，应该不是大的问题，咱们关心的是，考生太过依靠所谓的模板，而使得文章没有灵活度，否则，期望经过所谓捷径来快速取得抱负的分数往往会适得其反。

　　本文中，将首要经过剖析双方结构类型作文中比较常见的论题，为考生剖析怎么淡化写作中的模板痕迹，使文章更为灵活。

　　剖析

　　真题链接：In some countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

　　以上是剑桥中的考试真题，信任咱们都现已十分熟悉了。咱们就一同结合此题，对双方结构的整体文章结构和遣词造句做一个简略的比照。

　　1. 导言段

　　导言段是通篇作文的开篇之作，关于它的写法多种多样。可是无论怎样书写，切忌呈现以下模式性的句子样式：

　　模板言语：

　　Nowadays, the discussion about ……is a very controversial one. Those who criticize……. argue that……, but people who advocate……, on the other hand, maintain that……

　　这样的模板信任咱们不会陌生，它从前受到很多考生的喜爱。可是咱们说过，这样过于机械的言语，很难体现出考生对考题文字的了解，更为糟糕的是，你的最初有或许和很多人是重复的!

　　下面咱们就做一个简略的比照：

　　非模板言语：

　　No matter in which country, children are, without any exception, regarded as the protected in society, not to mention making them involved in any forms of paid-work(调用布景知识，引出论题).The necessity of allowing them to make money with their own hands is indeed worth discussing(结合对考题文字的统一转化，天然流露双方评论倾向)

　   2. 主体段

　　模板言语：

　　1. The benefits of…… can be perceived in many aspects.

　　In the first place, 分论点一. For instance, 例证 / 言语证明。In the second place, 分论点二. 证明.

　　2. However, ……has also given rise to a lot of problems.

　　For one thing,……For another……, Finally,……

　　在传统的模板里，双方结构的主体段只是简略地分段证明两方面的观念，虽然将两种敌对观念展示的十分明晰，可是也不免落入模式化的俗套。

　　做一个简略的比照：

　　非模板言语：

　　a. 退让剖析

　　Admittedly, hardship and bitterness of life could drive people to become mature. Under working pressure, children think about finishing their tasks before the deadline instead of concerning how to kill their seemingly limitless free time. Work may be the only priority of their life. It is fairly different between taking a dollar from their parents and earning one by themselves. Only the tough reality can force them to get rid of selfishness and dependence on their parents, which is exactly one of the most urgently needed cures in parental education.

　　双方结构的一个重要特点便是双方证明两种观念，在这篇文章里可以先退让证明一个观念，这样可以为后一个观念的证明供给很好的比照。

　　b. 转折过渡+提出观念

　　However, everything is mixed blessing. Employing children to work should be viewed as a harsh treatment and abuse to them. Kids, after all, unlike adults, are immature both physically and psychologically. They are extremely vulnerable to both occupational hazards and social evils. More importantly, children are at the golden age for learning not only due to their brain structure but also their curiosity and desire for knowledge. It goes without saying that the silly action permitting children to work for financial reasons is ridiculous.

　　双方结构的第二段要论述敌对面的观念，可是不同于上一段的是，此段不仅要充沛的客观陈述一种观念一起还要带有观念倾向，因为要完成文章的第二个任务---提出自己的观念。笔者以为这样的观念提法比较天然，不需求另起一段提出而显得比较板滞。

       3. 结束段

　　模板言语：

　　In the final analysis, I concede that to some extent whether the ultimate effect of phenomena is good or not, one thing is certain that phenomenon in itself is neither good nor bad. And it is the uses to which it is put that determine its value to society. I am convinced that___________.

　　做一个简略的比照：

　　非模板言语：

　　In conclusion, although there lies various excuses for letting the young children work for salary, it is pointless that this way could benefit them in terms of accumulating work experience and learning the meaning of responsibility. (天然流露观念倾向)

　　作为双方结构作文的结束，需求总结全文，即主体段两段的大意，一起要结合题目本身的特点提出明显的个人观念。

　　总结

　　和上篇文章一样，主张各位考生：不要盲目追求所谓模板，要注重灵活度。笔者以为，中国考生写作得分低，除了语法这个大问题以外，其实一味背诵模 板甚至到处套用所谓“万能模板”是丢分的一大原因。写作的最高境界便是把各种连接化于无形，实现语义的天然联接。考生必须依据考题的要求，调用自己原有的 言语配上正确的语法，使作文具有明显的个人特色，侃侃而谈。在考场中，拉近与考官的间隔而不是设置一道冷冰冰的“模板墙”。

　　固然，灵活、合理地运用雅思写作模板能在短时间内帮助雅思写作根底比较差的考生进步不少，可是如果想要真实获得高分的雅思写作，那么就必须突破突破雅思写作模板才能获雅思考官的喜爱。小编预祝同学们在雅思考试中取得好的成绩。

小编找到的是作者的一些见解，希望可以为考生们寻找到最好得分方式，也希望对大家有所帮助。最后，希望广大考生们在备考过程中提升自己的语言水平，取得更好的成绩。

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