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如果你真实理解IELTS academic writing的套路，这道题就是在太好写了。典型的折衷式写法-四段式，大负小正，小的方面放在前面写。以下辛达雅思代报小编

详细分析：

　　开头段+主体段1供认更严峻的赏罚是有用方法之一+主体段2提出还有其他的方法也必需要一起履行才能够+结尾段总结。Thesis statement 和 topic 

sentences 在范文里用下划线标明。理由用TM STREEC $系统解决，全程使用模板，22分钟在笔记本上完结创造。

　　高分关键词：car ownership轿车占有量 incidence 发生率 car wrecks 撞车 perpetrators 肇事者 stiff punishment/severe punishment/ harsh penalty 严峻的

赏罚 halt/curb 遏止 rampant 猖獗的 apprehensive 形容词，对……有所顾忌的 surveillance camera 监控摄像头 promulgate 颁布(法令) hazard (危险) forestall=prevent 预防 pedestrian 行人

　　jaywalk 违章横穿马路 circumvent 规避 the law enforcement执法(部分) draconian(法令)严峻的 lax (法令)懈怠的

　　The soaring car ownership in China has thrown the issue of traffic accidents into sharp relief. According to recent research conducted by China's Ministry 

of Transportation, the annual incidence of car wrecks is nearly three times as high as the corresponding figure a decade ago. Many people have been alarmed 

by this trend and assert that imposing stiffer punishment on the perpetrators is the only effective way to curb this disturbing phenomenon. Speaking for 

myself, I tend to believe their view has both merit and demerit.

　　Granted, more severe penalty does carry certain advantages in halting the rampant driving offenses on the roads.First and foremost ,it would be the most

cost-effective way to deter those would-be driving offenders. Heavy fines, long community service or even jail terms would render most of the aggressive 

drivers apprehensive about violating the traffic law, even without extra government funding to upgrade traffic surveillance cameras or augment traffic police 

force. Further, the effect of this hardline approach would be immediate. Once the related law is promulgated, we would be sure to witness a substantial 

decline in driving offenses overnight.

　　However, there are also traffic hazards that we cannot forestall by merely stiffening the punishment of aggressive or destructive driving conduct. 

To begin with, pedestrians who habitually jaywalk will not be discouraged by this move. Pedestrians account for a considerable proportion of traffic-accident 

culprits. Thus, pedestrian offenses such as jaywalking must be effectively checked as well. Secondly, if people who are regularly behind the wheel are not 

awakened to the horrific perils traffic offenses may breed , some of them will exploit every possibility to circumvent the law enforcement capability. If people 

abide by the traffic law solely out of fear for punishment, when a surveillance camera is out of order or the traffic police fail to keep tabs on a specific section 

of a freeway, all hell would break loose. Lastly, strict punishment of disorderly driving conduct does not guarantee infallible detection of driving offenses. 

Without sophisticated traffic-offense detecting apparatuses and an alert traffic police force, traffic laws, no matter how draconian, would be lax enough for 

hardened reckless drivers to disregard.

　　In the final analysis, I concede that harsh penalty for driving offenders constitutes an effective way to deter irresponsible driving behavi123 However, the 

growing trend of flagrant driving offenses cannot be halted by stiffer punishment of driving offenders alone. Hence we must take a more integrated approach 

to this modern-day scourge, possibly including equally heavy punishment for pedestrian offenses, the heightening of people's awareness about the horrific 

consequences of reckless driving and the advancement of traffic offense detectors and more capable traffic law enforcement forces.

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