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说到雅思的考官范文,相信许多备考雅思同学的感触都是“敬而远之”, 以为考官的范文都是以生词难句构成的。事实真的是这么么?凡是能够静下心来琢磨考官范文的学生, 都会发现考官的范文并没有咱们的幻想的那么难。乃至还有点“简略”—— 用词简略,但句式许多样。下边,就让咱们一同来看看辛达雅思代报为咱们带来的范文解析及一些写作技巧。
先给咱们看一篇考官范文,来看看考官是假如用简略的词写出不简略的语句的。
此文选自剑桥雅思真题集8- Test1.
首要进入到文章的最初段:
A child’s education has never been about learning information and basic skills only.(1) It has always included teaching the next generation how to be good members of society.(2) Therefore, this cannot be the responsibility of the parents alone. (3)
无论是榜首句话中的“never”及“only”也罢, 仍是最终一句的“not”及“alone”也罢, 考官都运用了咱们在汉语表述相同会用得到的一种表达方法——两层否定表必定,然后增强语句语气。 第二句中的the next generation 也是不错的用法, 这也是咱们上一讲中提到过的less common vocabulary。 短语中的独自每个单词选择出来咱们都认识, 可是放到一同的这种说法, 大多数同学仍是无法把握的。
接下来咱们进入到文章的主体段2:
In order to be a good member of any society the individual must respect and obey the rules of their community and share their values.(1) Educating children to understand the need to obey rules and respect others always begins in the home and is widely thought to be the responsibility of parents.(2) They will certainly be the first to help children learn what is important in life, how they are expected to behave and what role they will play in their world. (3)
首要来看句1和句2, 运用了特别最初词的写作方法“in order to ”(介词短语放句首)及“Educating”(动名词放句首)。 大多数同学写语句时,名词代词放句首的偏多, 特别最初词引出语句的办法这点咱们也是能够学习的。
再来看语句中的respect and obey 这组, 及what is important in life, how they are expected to behave and what role they will play in their world这组, 两组都属于平行结构, 一组是短语平行, 一组是平行中最高档的用法——从句平行。
本段资料的最终这句, 不只是三个从句的平行,并且全能性还很强。 咱们能够把主句They will certainly be the first to help children learn中的主语They换成别的主语, 如自愿效劳作业。 咱们再来看下这个语句,自愿效劳作业能够帮着孩子们学习什么是主要的, 应当怎么做以及应当在世界中起到如何的效果。 三个从句写出来, 不只语句长度拉长, 一起还展现了考官书写从句的才能,最主要的是, 考生们还能够学习到触类旁通的句式!
最终来看下句2的谓语, 共有两个, 分别为begin 及 be widely thought , 一自动一被迫, 这又何曾不是添加语句灵活度的方法?
接下来进入到主体段2:
However, learning to understand and share the value system of a whole society cannot be achieved just in the home.(1) Once a child goes to school, they are entering a wider community where teachers and peers will have just as much influence as their parents do at home. (2)At school, children will experience working and living with people from a whole variety of backgrounds from the wider society. (3)This experience should teach them how to co-operate with each other and how to contribute to the life of their community. (4)
先来看本段的句1, 一方面两层否定表必定了- not 及just用法。 再一方面还起到了承上启下的效果,起到对学校教育的论说。 句2, once及where引导两个从句做嵌套, 语句虽长, 但论说逻辑明晰。 阶段的句尾再次呈现平行结构,也是为了和上段做照应。
But to be a valuable member of any community is not like learning a simple skill. It is something that an individual goes on learning throughout life and it is the responsibility of every member of a society to take responsibility for helping the younger generation to become active and able members of that society.
进入到结尾段, 通常要给出观念及观念,这儿咱们看到考官在给出观念时用到了这么一个短语“active and able”。大多数人看到后没有任何感受,但他实际用的是押头韵的用法。 和其类似的还有, Beauty and the Beast, League of Legend 以及 Pride and Prejudice,只需留神, 这种在影片及杂志上的资料你也会留神到。
这即是C8T1的范文, 咱们做了剖析。 相信对大多数辛达雅思代报同学来讲,此篇文章呈现的生词不会超越三个, 乃至对大多数人来说, 这篇资料是没有生词的。可是考官即是用了两层否定表必定,特别最初词, 平行结构及押头韵等等表达了多样的句式! 所以咱们看出, 真恰好的作文不是生词长句, 而是像考官资料相同用简单词表达多样的句式!
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