雅思写作:巧妙转述题目的官方指南


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 雅思小作文首段的使命即是改写标题,看似简略,但不是所有辛达代报烤鸭们都有明晰的思路。“天下武功,唯快不破。” 考场上一定要能够迅速改写小作文标题,速度提高的要害就思路明晰,总结自官方攻略的paraphrasing 秘籍速来领取!

  # 招数1 “这个表格”更换 (主语)

  详细化:啥表格?(反之亦然,标题说详细表格类型,改写时可换成简称)

  The graph below -- The bar chart / The line chart / The pie chart

  The graph and table – the data / the information (关于信息方式多样的表格能够直接归纳为data数据或information信息)

  Gives information 合适的情况下还能够更换为illustrate the performance of

  …gives information about Southland’s main exports -- …illustrates the performance of Southland’s primary exports

  也能够把表格数量详细化: the pie charts – the two pie charts,别的,the 也能够换为this

  # 招数2 “展现了”更换 (动词)

  shows – illustrates / demonstrates 或compares 或gives information / provides infromation

  除了常见的shows, illustrates, demonstrates这些同义表达的彼此更换外,范文中经常会运用compares 或gives information 来表达。

  # 招数3 要害词更换

  1. yearly/ annual …– …over the year / per year年均

  Example: yearly rainfall – amount of rainfall over the year

  the average number of hours of sunshine per year-- annual hours of sunshine

  2. percentage – proportion 份额

  3. male and female -- men and women 男性和女性

  4. 工作类型 – who从句

  Example: academic staff members across the faculties -- who taught in seven different faculties (academic staff:教职人员, 即是”who taught …”的意思)

  5. typical – average “典型的”和“均匀的”往往能够交换,比方“均匀降雨量”

  6. household – home 家庭的

  Example: in a typical Australian household –in an average Australian home

  7. be consumed – be used 被耗费的/运用的

  8. the proportion of – where …is used

  Example: the proportion of energy consumed -- where energy is used

  9. by age range – of different ages 按不一样年龄

  10. give money to charity – donate(v.) / make donation (n.) 捐款

  11. the changes that have taken place at … --…development …的开展

  12. main exports -- primary exports 首要的

  # 招数4 “项目“更换

  详细化:种类A,种类B and 种类C – 3个种类(反之亦然,标题说种类个数,改写时可换成详细种类称号)

  in Moscow and San Francisco -- in two cities

  in three major cities -- in London, New York and Sydney

  # 招数5 “动作“详细化

  how a solar powered water pump works -- how a solar powered water pump is used to supply water for a village. (把work这个动词在该写时依据图表详细化为”被用来供水“)

  # 招数6“数据“详细化

  in 2003 and 2013 – in the years 2003 and 2013 (详细化“年“)

  the online shopping sales -- the percentages of online sales (详细化数据类型:百分比)

  # 招数7 时刻表达

  1. 时刻段表达

  from 2003 to 2012 – during the period 2003-2012

  2. 将来时刻

  当标题中出现关于将来数据的预测时,能够用projection, prediction 来表达,别的,留意细节阶段时态要变换为将来时。

  in 2000, *20…, and future projections for 2025

  # 招数8 词性变换+ 句型变换

  the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre -- how crime rates altered in Newport inner city

  以上比如中,changes是名词,能够说the changes that took place in…/ the changes of ...(运用的句式是定语从句或of 结构“…的“)

  改写以后的alter也表“改变“是动词方式,句型也有the change that…/ of… 变成了how…V+ed (宾语从句)

  把以上招数依照顺序融会贯通,小作文标题改写大法就练成了,让我们来看一看红蓝OG中的详细标题以及改写。

  The graph below shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012 (practice test 2, blue version)

   Sample Answer:

  The bar chart shows the proportion of men and women who taught in seven different faculties of a particular university in 2012.

  The pie chart below shows where energy is used in a typical Australian household, and the table shows the amount of electricity used according to the number of occupants. (practice test 4, blue version)

  Sample Answer:

  The pie chart illustrates the proportion of energy consumed by different appliances in an average Australian home.




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