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题目：

Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the 

dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

中文翻译：

有些被拘禁的人后来成为好公民，人们常常以为这些人是与青少年谈论违法危险的比较好的人。 你在多大程度上同意或不同意?

范文：

It is true that ex-prisoners can become normal, productive members of society. I completely agree with the idea that allowing such people to speak to 

teenagers about their experiences is the best way to discourage them from breaking the law.

In my opinion, teenagers are more likely to accept advice from someone who can speak from experience. Reformed offenders can tell young people about 

how they became involved in crime, the dangers of a criminal lifestyle, and what life in prison is really like. They can also dispel any ideas that teenagers may 

have about criminals leading glamorous lives. While adolescents are often indifferent to the guidance given by older people, I imagine that most of them 

would be extremely keen to hear the stories of an ex-offender. The vivid and perhaps shocking nature of these stories is likely to have a powerful impact.

The alternatives to using reformed criminals to educate teenagers about crime would be much less effective. One option would be for police officers to visit 

schools and talk to young people. This could be useful in terms of informing teens about what happens to lawbreakers when they are caught, but young 

people are often reluctant to take advice from figures of authority. A second option would be for school teachers to speak to their students about crime, but I 

doubt that students would see teachers as credible sources of information about this topic. Finally, educational films might be informative, but there would be 

no opportunity for young people to interact and ask questions.

In conclusion, I fully support the view that people who have turned their lives around after serving a prison sentence could help to deter teenagers from 

committing crimes.

(287 words, band 9)

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