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       六.指代不清(ambiguous reference of pronouns)

　　指代不清主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清，或许先后所用的代词不一致。试看下面这一句：

　　mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.

　　(玛丽和我姐姐很要好，由于她要她做她的伴娘。)

　　读完上面这一句话，读者无法清晰地判别两位姑娘中谁将成婚，谁将当伴娘。如果咱们把易于引起误解的代词的所指对象加以清晰，意思就一望而知了。这个语句可改为：

　　mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.

　　例1. and we can also know the society by serving it yourself.分析：句中人称代词we和反身代词yourself指代不一致。改为：

　　we can also know society by serving it ourselves.

　　七.不间断语句(run-on sentences)

　　什么叫run-on sentence?请看下面的例句。

　　例1. there are many ways we get to know the outside world.分析：这个语句包含了两层完整的意思：“there are many ways.”以及“we get to know the outside world.”。简略地把它们连在一起就不妥当了。

　　改为：

　　there are many ways for us to learn about the outside world.或：there are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside world

　　八.措词缺点(troubles in diction)

　　diction是指在特定的语句中怎样适当地选用词语的问题，囿于教学时刻急迫，教师平常在这方面花的时刻往往极端有限，影响了学生在写作中没有养成良好的琢磨，斟酌的习惯。他们往往随心所欲，拿来就用。所以作文中用词不妥的过错比比皆是。

　　例1. the increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution.

　　(农业方面化学物质运用的不断添加也造成了污染。)

　　分析：显然，考生把obstacles“妨碍”，“妨碍物”误作substance“物质”了。别的“the increasing use (不断添加的运用)”应改为“abusive use (滥用)”。

　　改为：

　　the abusive use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes/leads to pollution.

　　九.累赘(redundancy)

　　言以简练为贵。写语句没有一个多余的词;写段落没有一个无必要的语句。能用单词的不必词组;能用词组的不必从句或语句。如：

　　in spite of the fact that he is lazy, i like him.本句的“the fact that he is lazy”系同谓语从句，咱们依照上述“能用词组的不必从句”能够改为：in spite of his laziness, i like him.例1. for the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need.

　　分析：整个语句能够大大简化。

　　改为：

　　diligent, caring people use money only to buy what they need.

　　十.不连贯(incoherence)

　　不连贯是指一个语句前言不对后语，或是结构上不畅通。这也是考生常犯的缺点。

　　例1. the fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth.

　　分析：the fresh water与逗号后的it不连贯。it与things在数方面不一致。

　　常见联词

　　表层进

　　first, firstly to begin with/second, secondly to start with/third, thirdly what's more/also and then/and equ

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