剖析雅思作文需要重视的十大核心准则(下)


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雅思写作一直都是我国考生的弱项,The Elements of Style一书中,作者提到了关于英文写作的10个中心原则,下面便和辛达雅思代报小编一起来学习一下。


       5. Omit needless words

  删去冗词

  Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts. This requires not that the writer make all his sentences short, or that he avoid all detail and treat his subjects only in outline, but that every word tell.

  有力的写作必定简洁。

  Owing to the fact that

  =Since (because)

  In spite of the fact that

  =Though (although)

  Call your attention to the fact that

  =Remind you (notify you)

  The fact that he had not succeeded

  =His failure


  6. Avoid a succession of loose sentences

  别写流水账,找找言语的逻辑联系,通过who, which, when, where, and while 这些词把语句串起来。


  7. Express co-ordinate ideas in similar form

  Parallel structure 平行结构讲究对称美:内容对等,结构一致。

  Eg: Formerly, science was taught by the textbook method, while now the laboratory method is employed.

  Parallel structure: Formerly, science was taught by the textbook method; now it is taught by the laboratory method.


  8. Keep related words together

  词的方位决定词的联系,所以遵从‘物以类聚’,意思关联严密的词放在一块。

  A: 主谓之间不分割,弥补信息需前置

  Eg: Wordsworth, in the fifth book of The Excursion, gives a minute description of this church.

  Eg: In the fifth book of the Excursion, Wordsworth gives a minute description of this church. (状语前置,主谓毗邻)

  B:联系代词紧随先行词出现

  Eg: There was a look in his eye that boded mischief.

  Eg: In his eye was a look that boded mischief. (名词look先行,联系词that紧随)


  9. In summaries, keep to one tense

  总结一般运用现在时态,假如运用过去时,请坚持时态一致。


  10. Place the emphatic words of a sentence at the end

  欲擒故纵的圆周句(periodic sentence)中,着重信息后置。

  Eg: Four centuries ago, Christopher Columbus, one of the Italian mariners whom the decline of their own republics had put at the service of the world and of adventure, seeking for Spain a westward passage to the Indies as setoff against the achievements of Portuguese discoverers, lighted on America.

  Eg: With these hopes and in this belief I would urge you, laying aside all hindrance, thrusting away all private aims, to devote yourselves unswervingly and unflinchingly to the vigorous and successful prosecution of this war.


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