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雅思写作是许多雅思考生最为头疼的,一起也是得分最不理想的一个部分。在写作实战中,考生遇到的问题往往有以下几种:一、时刻不充足。许多考生在写作
中手忙脚乱,不知从何处下手,思绪无法集中,因而时刻不够用,导致写作任务无法完结,由此导致失分严重。二、字数不够,尤其是大作文。许多考生的写作
进程可谓是非常苦楚,由于他们便是在想方设法硬凑字数,可想进程是过么辛苦加苦楚。即使字数够了,在这种情况下挤牙膏似的挤出来的文章质量能又能有多
高呢。考生底子不会考虑到文章的结构和逻辑,更不会有一气呵成,行云流水般的美感了。三、在写作进程中浮想联翩,洋洋洒洒写了许多,可是却不能得高
分,由于考生在写的进程中是想到什么就写什么,更有甚者是一句话可能会来来回回重复几回。他们底子不知道雅思写作的特点,不知道怎么组织文章的结构,
怎么提出观念,怎么证明,怎么打开阶段,因而整片文章就像一盘散沙,会存在观念不明确、证明论据缺乏力度、结构逻辑混乱等问题。
雅思大作文要求在40分钟内完结250字的写作,关于大部分中国考生来说,仍是比较困难的,由于不管是在中学仍是在大学,他们遇到的英文写作一般都是120
字,大学英语六级也只有150字。因而,考生们觉得很难高质量地完结250字的英文写作也是情理之中。辛达雅思代报小编认为,造成这个问题的主要原因是考
生们不知怎么打开阶段,怎么提出观念,然后进行证明。雅思大作文一般分为最初段、主体段和定论段。其间,最初段和定论段所占字数较少,并且写起来相对
容易。而主体段字数较多,写起来要复杂的多。能够说,主体段的写作直接关系着能否满足字数要求,并且也最能体现文章的逻辑性。
主体阶段一般由主题句和扩展句构成。主题句一般放在榜首句,是阶段中心,用来归纳全段内容。主题句分为抽象主题句和具体主题句。抽象主体句的作用是引
出下文,点明方向,具体主题句则概况下面内容的中心主题。仅有主题观念是不够的,还要对其进行证明,也便是环绕主题进行证明,对其进行阐明、叙说、举
例及论说。
一、举实例证明。
有些考生在最初提出观念之后,就不知道该怎么继续下去。这种情况下,考生能够举实例证明,举例是咱们解说证明一个观念最好的办法,也是最有说服力的。
Although sticking to one’s goal is key to success, sometimes one should be ready to give up. Napoleon’s story is a case in point. After
Napoleon succeeded in seizing the crown of France, he should have been satisfied with his achievement. But he did not. He went on to conquer
the whole Europe. Then after he succeeded in ruling almost the whole Europe, he should have given up this ambition to expanding his empire.
But he did not. He went on to invade Russia and there he suffered a total defeat. Later he was sent into exile and died in a lonely island.
本段引证了拿破仑的事迹来加以证明。拿破仑是众所周知的人物,并且最终决议拿破仑及其帝国命运的滑铁卢战争也是大家都知晓的。经过这个例子来阐明在恰
当的时分学会抛弃是很有说服力的。在举例时,最好选择一些大家都知晓的,这样才干更有说服力。当然考生也能够用自己的亲身经历来加以证明。
The second reason for my propensity for outdoor activities is that they can build my mind greatly. In sports, one must learn to struggle for the
victory, learn to fight with no matter what is left in his body. And one must learn to stick to one’s own confidence and hope, no matter how little
the hope may be. And one must learn to accept failure, learn to start again after failure. Long-running and mountain climbing contribute much to
this kind of spirits. I will never forget the feeling when I raced to the final line first in a 300-meter running. I could hardly breathe in the last 100
meters. My lungs ached and my legs weighed tons, but there was still one runner in front of me. I gave all my strength to move one foot ahead of
the other. When I surpassed him, he gave a cry of surprise, I won at last and I learned much from the race.
文章在提出主题句后,先是加以论说,然后用长跑和爬山作为例子。最终又用自己的亲身经历和感受来证明室外活动能够增强一个人的毅力。
二、用一些研究、查询、发现、科学家及威望人士的观念或组织组织的研究结果加以证明,并引证数据作为支撑。此证明办法的好处便是比较威望客观,更有说服力。
If people move to live in different places, they will have more opportunity for improving their lives. According to a survey conducted by the
Chinese Academy of Social Sciences, 55% of urban Chinese had changed their living place at least once in their lifetime by 2000, an increase of 30
percent as compared with that of 2 decades ago. Chinese sociologists agree that this trend is most likely to continue with the development
society. Statistics indicate that people who moved at least once in their lifetime enjoy a much higher living standard than those who never moved.
本段先是引证中科院的查询数据加以证明,然后用某些专家和数据继续加以证明。有一点值得注意,许多考生并不知道真实的数据,考试中往往是自己的发明创
造。所以没有把握的情况下,尽量不要去写那些众所周知的人或许组织,能够模糊地用某个组织或某个学者,数据上也千万不要太夸大,只要能达到有力够证明
自己的观念即可。
小编找到的是作者的一些见解,希望可以为考生们寻找到最好得分方式,也希望对大家有所帮助。最后,希望广大考生们在备考过程中提升自己的语言水平,取得更好的成绩。
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