探秘雅思写作7分技巧(二)


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现在的年轻人总是会宣布“理想很饱满,实际很骨感”这样的感叹,来表达对实际生活的无法。而在雅思写作考试中,考生们又何曾不会经历这种无法呢?写作7分是许多考生朝思暮想的分数,但即使是一些外籍教师所撰写的范文,在考官笔下也不过是7-8分!关于国内大多数雅思考生而言,7分似乎是可望而不可及的。那么,究竟怎样的文章,才能得到考官的青睐,最终走运的得到7分的分数呢?一起跟随辛达雅思代报小编来看一下吧。


三.Lexical resource

1. 具体要求

Lexical resource表示词汇。在官方给出的评分标准中,7分有这样的要求:

1. Uses sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision

2. Uses less common lexical items with some awareness of style and collocation

3. May produce occasional errors in word choice, spelling and/or word formation

①灵活并且准确运用各种词汇。②正确搭配和运用不太一般的短语。

2. 范例评析

▲ 剑桥雅思全真试题7 Test2 Task2

Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should be taken into account when deciding the punishment.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

7.5分考生范文选段:固定不变的科罪准则和分状况灵活的科罪准则

On the one hand, fixed punishment will have a deterring effect on society. Individuals knowing that they will be subject to a certain punishment if they are convicted with a given crime will reconsider committing this act in the first place. This deterring effect also leads to social stability and security, through minimizing the number of crimes committed. If people knew they would be able to convince the court or the jury of reason for having committed the crime they are accused of, penal decisions would be largely arbitrary. This would result into criminals getting away with their crimes and into a high level of injustice caused by the subjective approach of different courts.

On the other hand, taking the circumstance of a crime and its motivation into consideration is a prerequisite for establishing and ensuring justice and equity. A person killing in self-defense cannot be compared to a serial killer, moving from one victim to the next.

1. 词汇的多样运用:

①以为consider  重新考虑reconsider  考虑consideration

②惩罚(动词)Punish  惩罚(名词)punishment  惩罚的penal

③违法Crime  罪犯criminal

2. 短语的多样运用:

①遵守be subject to

②判罪be convicted with

③违法commit crimes

④判决某人有某罪convince sb of sth

⑤办法the approach of

⑥考虑到take sth into consideration

⑦被指控be accused of

⑧前提a prerequisite for

⑨与某事相提并论be compared to

⑩理由reason for

3. 对策

①题干中心词与短语

“题干中心词与短语”是指在每个论题的标题中,会有一些呈现频率比较高的名词或短语。雅思议论文标题虽多,但是可以按论题分为八大类:教育,科技,环境与动物,媒体与广告,政府,工作与生活,言语与文化,法律与违法。复习以雅思写作机经为主,关注近两年的写作标题。

②资料中心词与短语

“资料中心词与短语”主要是指某一类论题作文常会证明的视点,一般是由一些“实意词”为主。建议考生按照论题很多研读范文的主题句或是支持句,去积累和总结。

四.Grammatical range and accuracy

1. 具体要求

Grammatical range and accuracy表示语法的准确性和多样性。在官方给出的评分标准中,7分有这样的要求:

1. Uses a variety of complex structures

2. Produces frequent error-free sentences

3. Has good control of grammar and punctuation but may make a few errors

①可以运用各种复合结构。②语句无语法错误。③可以正确运用语法和标点。

2. 范例评析

▲ 剑桥雅思全真试题7 Test2 Task2

Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should be taken into account when deciding the punishment.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

7.5分考生范文选段:

On the one hand, fixed punishment will have a deterring effect on society. Individuals knowing that they will be subject to a certain punishment if they are convicted with a given crime will reconsider committing this act in the first place. This deterring effect also leads to social stability and security, through minimizing the number of crimes committed. If people knew they would be able to convince the court or the jury of reason for having committed the crime they are accused of, penal decisions would be largely arbitrary. This would result into criminals getting away with their crimes and into a high level of injustice caused by the subjective approach of different courts.

On the other hand, taking the circumstance of a crime and its motivation into consideration is a prerequisite for establishing and ensuring justice and equity. A person killing in self-defense cannot be compared to a serial killer, moving from one victim to the next.

1. 非谓语

①On the one hand, fixed punishment will have a deterring effect on society.

②This deterring effect also leads to social stability and security, through minimizing the number of crimes committed.

③This would result into criminals getting away with their crimes and into a high level of injustice caused by the subjective approach of different courts.

④A person killing in self-defense cannot be compared to a serial killer, moving from one victim to the next.

2. 虚拟语气

①If people knew they would be able to convince the court or the jury of reason for having committed the crime they are accused of, penal decisions would be largely arbitrary.

②This would result into criminals getting away with their crimes and into a high level of injustice caused by the subjective approach of different courts.

3. 对策

①防止常见语法错误

常见语法错误有:双谓语;介词搭配;并列结构。

②三大从句

熟练运用三大从句:名词性从句,状语从句,定语从句。

③特别句型

倒装句,强调句,独立主格,非谓语。

,再次提示考生:雅思作文阅卷考官全部是受过体系训练的native speaker, 具有丰厚的批阅雅思作文的经验,他们对中国学生存在的问题有相当全面的了解。因而,如果中国考生想要获取作文7分,就必须依据自己的状况制定具体的备考方案并锲而不舍。毋庸置疑,这终将是一场硬仗!

小编找到的是作者的一些见解,希望可以为考生们寻找到最好得分方式,也希望对大家有所帮助。最后,希望广大考生们在备考过程中提升自己的语言水平,取得更好的成绩。

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