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现在的年轻人总是会宣布“理想很饱满，实际很骨感”这样的感叹，来表达对实际生活的无法。而在雅思写作考试中，考生们又何曾不会经历这种无法呢？写作7分是许多考生朝思暮想的分数，但即使是一些外籍教师所撰写的范文，在考官笔下也不过是7-8分！关于国内大多数雅思考生而言，7分似乎是可望而不可及的。那么，究竟怎样的文章，才能得到考官的青睐，最终走运的得到7分的分数呢？一起跟随辛达雅思代报小编来看一下吧。
 
一．Task response
 
1. 具体要求
 
Task response表示任务的完成。在官方给出的评分标准中，7分有这样的要求：
 
1. Address all parts of the task,
 
2. Present a clear position throughout the response,
 
3. Present, extend and support main ideas, but there may be a tendency to over-generalize and/or supporting ideas may lack focus.
 
① 回答了标题要求的所有问题。②整篇文章观念鲜明。③具体的解释和证明了观念。
 
2. 典范评析
 
▲ 剑桥雅思全真试题7 Test2 Task2
 
Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should be taken into account when deciding the punishment.
 
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
 
1. 考生需要对标题中的两个相反的观念进行剖析，不能只剖析自己倾向的观念。即：固定不变的科罪准则有何作用；根据违法动机和环境灵活的科罪准则有何作用。
 
2. 考生需要十分清楚的标明自己的观念，即回答应当怎么对罪犯的违法行为科罪。
 
3. 考生关于标题中两个相反观念的剖析需要摆出足够的论据，提出自己的理由并经过例子来证明。
 
7.5分考生范文选段：对固定不变的科罪准则的剖析
 
On the one hand, fixed punishment will have a deterring effect on society. ‖Individuals knowing that they will be subject to a certain punishment if they are convicted with a given crime will reconsider committing this act in the first place. ‖This deterring effect also leads to social stability and security, through minimizing the number of crimes committed. ‖If people knew they would be able to convince the court or the jury of reason for having committed the crime they are accused of, penal decisions would be largely arbitrary. This would result into criminals getting away with their crimes and into a high level of injustice caused by the subjective approach of different courts.
 
1. 观念：固定的赏罚准则对社会有威慑力。（fixed punishment will have a deterring effect on society。）
 
2. 理由：考虑违法本钱（reconsider committing crimes in the first place）
 
3. 扩展成果：有利于社会稳定（lead to social stability and security through minimizing the number of crimes committed.）
 
4. 理由：假如没有固定的科罪准则，会使违法分子更猖狂。（If people knew they would be able to convince the court or the jury of reason for having committed the crime they are accused of , penal decisions would be largely arbitrary.）
 
5. 扩展成果：违法分子逍遥法外，不利于司法公正。（criminals getting away with their crimes and a high level of injustice caused by the subjective approach of different courts.）
 
3. 对策
 
① 复习真题，找生词
 
在考题中，经常出现中心词汇的重复，比方：distance learning, criminal等。建议考生们可以在复习写作时，先把近两年的写作标题过一遍，查查生词。这样做可以大大降低考生在作文题中遭遇生词的为难，进步审题的准确性。
 
②掌握不同题型大作文的写作要点
 
观念类：可以支持、反对、中立，一定要表达自己的观念。论据要充沛，举例不可或缺。
 
剖析处理类：所问即所答，要点剖析原因，处理办法多角度。
 
③八大论题，要点打破
 
在考题中，“教育，科技，环保，全球化，政府，媒体，作业，社会生活”为常考的八大论题。复习要点有以下几方面：1. 每个论题的中心词汇要纯熟于心。2. 每个论题要堆集至少两个可以作举例证明的实例。3. 每个论题至少选择两道标题做brainstorming思路拓宽操练。4. 每个论题要至少堆集两篇范文。5. 每个考生对自己不熟悉的论题，要加强以上操练。
 
二． Coherence and cohesion
 
1. 具体要求
 
Coherence and cohesion表示连接一致。在官方给出的评分标准中，7分有这样的要求：
 
1. Logically organizes information and ideas; there is a clear progression throughout
 
2. Uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately although there may be some under/over-use
 
3. Presents a clear central topic within each paragraph
 
①文章结构赋有逻辑性。②正确运用多种联接办法。③每段话的中心思想明确。
 
2. 典范评析
 
▲  剑桥雅思全真试题7 Test2 Task2
 
Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should be taken into account when deciding the punishment.
 
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
 
7.5分考生范文选段：考生回答应当怎么对罪犯的违法行为科罪。
 
In my opinion an intermediary position between both solutions is the perfect way to establish and ensure justice and equity. There have to be fixed punishment for all crimes. However, criminal laws have to provide for a minimum and maximum for the punishment and the laws also have to foresee certain cases of exemptions. An example for setting minimum and maximum penalties is Competition Law where a person being held liable of a crime under this law will be convicted to pay a fine, according to the harm caused by the violation and the profit gained by the violator through committing the crime. As for the exemptions, in some countries the law exempts thieves stealing food during a period of famine taking into consideration the distress and hunger. Also, a person killing in self-defense will be exempted from punishment.
 
1. 中心思想：关于违法分子的科罪应该有折中的办法，这才是确保公正公正的办法。（an intermediary position between both solutions is the perfect way to establish and ensure justice and equity.）
 
2. 阶段结构一分为二：
 
①固定下来科罪的底线和上线，举例“竞争法”。
 
②科罪要有免罪的特殊处理。举例“饥馑时偷食物的行为”和“正当防卫”。
 
3. 联接的处理：文中加粗的部分（包含连接词，代词等）。
 
3. 对策
 
①代词
 
代词包括人称代词，物主代词和一些特定的词语。代词的运用可以进步表达的一致性。
 
②同义词，反义词等含义相互关联的词
 
恰当运用一些相关或相同概念的词，可以到达整篇文章天然扩展的作用。
 
③连接词
 
连接词是实现阶段内部表达连接的最主要的手法。它可以增进句与句，或者段与段之间的逻辑关系。

小编找到的是作者的一些见解，希望可以为考生们寻找到最好得分方式，也希望对大家有所帮助。最后，希望广大考生们在备考过程中提升自己的语言水平，取得更好的成绩。

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