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一、改动语句最初
许多学生在写作中倾向于用与人有联系的词性,用名词和代词作为语句的最初,如 People,We,I,He,They,She等。但这种最初见多了,不免让人厌倦。试比较:
A.People throughout the country have greatly demanded all kinds of nutritious food.
B.There is a great demand across the country for all kinds of nutritious food.
榜首句改用非人称名词作为主语最初,第二句则用there +be句型最初。这样既改动了主语+谓语+宾语单调句型,又把想着重的意思杰出出来。实际上,为了把文章写得生动生动,除了用主语最初外,还能够用语句的其他成分最初。
1.用副词最初
Too often,students stray into the habit of cheating on tests.
2.用同位语最初
Air,water and oxygen,everything that is necessary for life.
3.用状语最初
Dark and empty,the house looked very different from the way I remembered it.
4.用表语最初
Equally essential to the highest success in learning a language are intense interest plus persistent effort.
5.用宾语最初
My advice you would not listen to;my helps you laughed at.Now you will have what you asked for.
6.以短语修饰语最初
1)以介词短语最初
To me the news was very interesting,but to my wife very boring.
2)以分词短语最初
Disturbed by the discord of American life in recent decades,Menchester took flight for the pacific islands.
3)以不定式短语最初
To pass the exam,you should work very hard.
二、巧用连接词
有的学生在作文中运用过多简单句,成了简单句堆砌;有的写杂乱句时,动辄用so, and,then,but,or,however,yet等非但达不到丰厚表达方式的意图,反而使语句结构松懈、板滞。为了防止这种现象,能够通过运用连接词,尤其是一些表明从属联系的连接词,如 who,which,that,because,since,although,after,as,before,when,whenever,if,unless,as if等,不只能够丰厚句型,并且还能够把思维表达得更清楚,意义更连接。例如:
Natural resources are very limited.They will be exhausted in the near future.It is not true.But it becomes a major concern around the world.This is a widely accepted fact.
这段文字用简单句表达,它们之间内在的逻辑联系含糊不清,意思四分五裂。假如运用连接词,将单句与其前后兼并,构成主次联系,就把一个比较杂乱的内容和联系表达得层次清楚、结构谨慎。例如:
It is a widely accepted fact that there is a major concern around the world for the exhaustion of limited natural resources in the near future,though it is unlikely to be true.
再如:
The Mississippi River is one of the longest rivers in the world,and in spring time it often overflows its banks,and the lives of many people are endangered.
此句用and把三个分句一向究竟,既庸俗又可笑。假如运用了联系代词which,语义就会更连接,言语也会更流通:
The Mississippi River,which is one of the longest rivers in the world,often overflows its banks in the spring time,endangering the lives of many people.
三、长短句交插
长句和短句是就语句的字数多少、形体长短而言的。长句和短句各有其长处和缺陷。长句,由于运用的定语、状语较多,约束了概念的外延,增大了概念的内在,所以比较精确、紧密,但运用起来不行生动简便。短句,由于字数少,开门见山,一般比较简练、明快、有力,但不利于表达杂乱的语义内容。在详细言语活动中,最好长短句替换运用。这既表现了节奏上的要求,也是意义上的需求。例如:
(1)We can imagine the beautiful surroundings.(2)There are many trees along the streets.(3)There is a clean river in the city.(4) There are many fishes in the river.(5)There are willow trees on the one side.(6)There are some pieces of grassland on the other side.(7)There are many flowers on them.
文中七个语句都是简单句,句型结构单一,并且语句长短同一,都在七、八词左右,非常单调。下面是修改后的阶段:
(1)Just imagine the beautiful surroundings if we make our cities greener.(2)Green trees line the streets.(3)A clean river winds through the city,in which a lot of fishes abound.(4)On the one side stand rows of willow trees.(5)On the other side lies a stretch of grassland sprinkled with many yellow and red flowers.
改写后的这段文字,有长句(1)、(3)、(5),也有短句(2)和(4),一长一短,波澜起伏的节奏感就出来了。不只语句长短交插,并且句型结构改动也很大,使文章流通天然,生动生动。
四、使用倒装结构
英语的基本句型是S+V+O,假如偶然打破常规,改动某一成分的方位,不只能够丰厚句型,并且能着重、杰出被倒装的部分,收到意想不到的表达作用。例如:
1)In no other place in the world can one find such enthusiasm for applying for hosting the 2008 Olympic Games.
2)Faith in the Chinese economic reforms the majority of people will never lose.
总归,英语的句式是多种多样的,只要从要表达的内容动身合理选用,文章的句式就会富于改动。同时,在学习写作的过程中,学生应不断操练结构各种各样句式,以进步言语表达能力。
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