雅思写作高分技巧


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在雅思写作考试中,高分并非遥不可及,关键在于注意一些细节。接下来,让我们一起看看小编为大家整理的内容,共同提升写作技巧。

雅思写作技巧一:避免空洞词汇和词组

  1. 空洞的词汇或词组不能为句子增添任何相关或重要的信息,应予以删除。

    例如:原句“When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion”中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion”均显多余,可简化为:“Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents。”

  2. 替换空洞和繁琐的表达方式。

    例如:原句“Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time”中的“due to the fact that”繁琐冗长,可替换为:“Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now。”

雅思写作技巧二:避免重复

  1. 尽量避免重复使用相同的词汇,即使词汇不重复,意思重复也应进行简化。

    例如:原句“The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size”中的“large”已包含“size”的意思,因此可简化为:“The farm my grandfather grew up on was large”或“My grandfather grew up on a large farm”。

  2. 用更简单的单词替换词组。

    例如:原句“My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents' farm”中的“over and over again”可替换为“repeatedly”,使句子更简洁。

雅思写作技巧三:选择最恰当的语法结构

  1. 句子的主语和谓语动词应反映句子中的最重要意思。

    例如:原句“The situation that resulted in my grandfather's not being able to study engineering was that his father needed help on the farm”的主语和谓语不能强调需要表达的重点概念,可改为:“My grandfather couldn't study engineering because his father needed help on the farm。”

  2. 避免频繁使用“there be”结构,采用更简洁的句式。

    例如:原句“There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It was hard work for my grandfather”可改为:“My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily。”

  3. 把从句改为短语或单词,使句子更简洁。

    例如:原句“Dairy cows were raised on the farm, which was located 100 kilometers from the nearest university and was in an area that was remote”可简化为:“The dairy farm was located in a remote area, 100 kilometers to the nearest university。”

  4. 仅在需要强调宾语而不是主语时,才使用被动语态。

    例如:原句“In the fall, not only did the cows have to be milked, but also the hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfather's family”使用了被动语态,重心偏移,可改为主动语态:“In the fall, my grandfather's family not only milked the cows but also mowed and stacked the hay。”

  5. 用更精确的动词代替动词短语。

    例如:原句“My grandfather didn't have time to stand around doing nothing with his school friends”中的“stand around doing nothing”可用“loiter”替代:“My grandfather didn't have time to loiter with his school friends。”

  6. 合并信息,用一句话简洁表达。

    例如:原句“Profits from the farm were not large. Sometimes they were too small to meet the expenses of running a farm. They were not sufficient to pay for a university degree”可合并为:“Profits from the farm were sometimes too small to meet operational expenses, let alone pay for a university degree。”

希望以上内容能为有需要的同学提供帮助,也祝愿大家在雅思写作中取得优异成绩。

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