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如今的年轻人总是会发出“抱负很饱满，实际很骨感”这么的感叹，来表达对实际生活的无法。而在雅思写作考试中，考生们又何曾不会阅历这种无法呢?写作7分是很多考生朝思暮想的分数，但即使是一些外籍老师所编撰的范文，在考官笔下也不过是7-8分!关于国内大多数辛达雅思代报考生而言，7分似乎是可望而不可及的。那么，终究怎样的文章，才干得到考官的喜爱，终究走运的得到7分的分数呢?

　　一.Task response

　　1. 具体请求

　　Task response标明使命的完结。在官方给出的评分标准中，7分有这么的请求：

　　1. Address all parts of the task,

　　2. Present a clear position throughout the response,

　　3. Present, extend and support main ideas, but there may be a tendency to over-generalize and/or supporting ideas may lack focus。

　　① 答复了标题请求的一切疑问。②整篇文章观念鲜明。③具体的解说和证实了观念。

　　2. 范例剖析

　　▲ 剑桥雅思全真试题7 Test2 Task2

　　Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should be taken into account when deciding the punishment。

　　Discuss both views and give your own opinion。

　　1. 考生需求对标题中的两个相反的观念进行剖析，不能只剖析自个倾向的观念。即：固定不变的科罪准则有何作用;依据违法动机和环境灵活的科罪准则有何作用。

　　2. 考生需求非常明白的标明自个的观念，即答复应当怎么对罪犯的违法做法科罪。

　　3. 考生关于标题中两个相反观念的剖析需求摆出充足的论据，提出自个的理由并经过例子来证实。

　　7.5分考生范文选段：对固定不变的科罪准则的剖析

　　On the one hand, fixed punishment will have a deterring effect on society. ‖Individuals knowing that they will be subject to a certain punishment if they are convicted with a given crime will reconsider committing this act in the first place. ‖This deterring effect also leads to social stability and security, through minimizing the number of crimes committed. ‖If people knew they would be able to convince the court or the jury of reason for having committed the crime they are accused of, penal decisions would be largely arbitrary. This would result into criminals getting away with their crimes and into a high level of injustice caused by the subjective approach of different courts。

　　1. 观念：固定的赏罚准则对社会有威慑力。(fixed punishment will have a deterring effect on society。)

　　2. 理由：思考违法成本(reconsider committing crimes in the first place)

　　3. 拓展成果：有利于社会安稳(lead to social stability and security through minimizing the number of crimes committed。)

　　4. 理由：假如没有固定的科罪准则，会使违法分子更猖獗。(If people knew they would be able to convince the court or the jury of reason for having committed the crime they are accused of , penal decisions would be largely arbitrary。)

　　5. 拓展成果：违法分子逍遥法外，不利于司法公平。(criminals getting away with their crimes and a high level of injustice caused by the subjective approach of different courts。)

　　3. 对策

　　① 温习真题，找生词

　　在考题中，经常出现中心词汇的重复，比方：distance learning, criminal等。主张考生们可以在温习写作时，先把近两年的写作标题过一遍，查查生词。这么做可以大大下降考生在作文题中遭受生词的尴尬，进步审题的准确性。

　　②掌握不一样题型大作文的写作要点

　　观念类：可以支撑、对立、中立，一定要表达自个的观念。论据要充分，举例不可或缺。

　　剖析处理类：所问即所答，要点剖析因素，处理办法多角度。

　　③八大论题，要点打破

　　在考题中，“教学，科技，环保，全球化，政府，媒体，作业，社会生活”为常考的八大论题。温习要点有以下几方面：1. 每个论题的中心词汇要纯熟于心。2. 每个论题要堆集最少两个可以作举例证实的实例。3. 每个论题最少挑选两道标题做brainstorming思路拓宽操练。4. 每个论题要最少堆集两篇范文。5. 每个考生对自个不熟悉的论题，要加强以上操练。

　　二. Coherence and cohesion

　　1. 具体请求

　　Coherence and cohesion标明连接统一。在官方给出的评分标准中，7分有这么的请求：

　　1. Logically organizes information and ideas; there is a clear progression throughout

　　2. Uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately although there may be some under/over-use

　　3. Presents a clear central topic within each paragraph

　　①文章构造赋有逻辑性。②准确运用多种联接办法。③每段话的中心思想清晰。

　　2. 范例剖析

　　▲ 剑桥雅思全真试题7 Test2 Task2

　　Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should be taken into account when deciding the punishment。

　　Discuss both views and give your own opinion。

　　7.5分考生范文选段：考生答复应当怎么对罪犯的违法做法科罪。

　　In my opinion an intermediary position between both solutions is the perfect way to establish and ensure justice and equity. There have to be fixed punishment for all crimes. However, criminal laws have to provide for a minimum and maximum for the punishment and the laws also have to foresee certain cases of exemptions. An example for setting minimum and maximum penalties is Competition Law where a person being held liable of a crime under this law will be convicted to pay a fine, according to the harm caused by the violation and the profit gained by the violator through committing the crime. As for the exemptions, in some countries the law exempts thieves stealing food during a period of famine taking into consideration the distress and hunger. Also, a person killing in self-defense will be exempted from punishment。

　　1. 中心思想：关于违法分子的科罪应该有折中的办法，这才是确保公平公平的办法。(an intermediary position between both solutions is the perfect way to establish and ensure justice and equity。)

　　2. 阶段构造一分为二：

　　①固定下来科罪的底线和上线，举例“竞争法”。

　　②科罪要有赦罪的特别处理。举例“饥馑时偷食物的做法”和“正当防卫”。

　　3. 联接的处理：文中加粗的有些(包含连接词，代词等)。

　　3. 对策

　　①代词

　　代词包含人称代词，物主代词和一些特定的词语。代词的运用可以进步表达的统一性。

　　②近义词，反义词等含义彼此关联的词

　　恰当运用一些相关或相同概念的词，可以达到整篇文章天然拓展的作用。

　　③连接词

　　连接词是完成阶段内部表达连接的最主要的手法。它可以增进句与句，或许段与段之间的逻辑关系。