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在雅思考试的听说读写傍边,写作无疑是很多考生最薄弱的环节。而取得雅思写作高分,也是很多考生朝思暮想的方针。从证明的视点来看,一篇高分作文要紧扣宗旨,态度明晰;证明有力,逻辑性强。咱们常用的证明办法有:解说阐明法、举例证明法、比照比照法、退让辩驳法。其中,能够大大进步文章的证明力度和逻辑性的即是退让辩驳法。在这里,我联系剑桥雅思官方范文以及一些真题,与辛达雅思代报烤鸭们共享一下退让辩驳段的写法。
雅思写作退让辩驳段一般用于证明中的反方段,也即是咱们不太支撑的那一方观念。在写反方段时,首要,咱们要进行退让,供认反方观念存在必定的合理性,进行解说阐明,然后笔锋一转,进行辩驳。要记住:退让要让的充沛,辩驳要辩驳的有力。让咱们来看看一篇剑桥雅思官方范文中的退让辩驳段。
雅思写作标题:In many countries students have a break to travel or work for a yearfromstudy after they graduate from school. Do the advantages outweigh thedisadvantages?
这篇文章的论题是gap year,在范文的正方段中,考官支撑gap year, 以为这种做法优点多多,应当鼓励,然后考官写反方段,也即是gapyear的坏处,这个段落即是一个典型的退让辩驳段,具体如下:
However,there are certainly dangers in taking time off at this importantage. Young adults may end up never returning to their school,or finding itdifficult to readapt to an academic environment. They may think that it isbetter to continue in a particular job or to do something completely differentfrom a university course.But overall,I think this is less likely today,whenacademic qualifications are essential for getting a reasonable career.
剖析一下,考官首要供认gap year有坏处和疑问,由于经历了gapyear以后,有些学生有也许改动人生方向,不愿回到校园学习了,或许即便回校学习,也很难习惯学术环境。然后,考官笔锋一转,说可是在现在的社会,上述状况和疑问不太也许发作,由于如果想找到好工作、事业有成,学历是至关重要的。这个退让辩驳段就写的非常好,使得整篇文章证明更加有力,逻辑性更强,这篇文章无疑是高分之作。
不少同学感受退让辩驳段比照难写,不知道从啥视点辩驳。我在这里总结了一些行之有效的辩驳办法和辩驳视点:
1) 当咱们辩驳坏处时,咱们能够说坏处和疑问发作的也许性小,正如方才剖析的考官范文。此外,咱们还能够说坏处是能够处理或许能够转化的。
比方这个标题:Some people believe that time spent on television,video and computergames can be beneficial to children. Others believe that this has negativeeffects on a child. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.这个标题是对于孩童看电视打游戏的利害,假定咱们的反方是看电视打游戏的坏处,那么退让辩驳段能够这么写:不可否定,孩童看电视、打游戏存在坏处和疑问(如影响视力和学习、简单上瘾),可是这些疑问是能够处理的:只需爸爸妈妈协助孩童进步自控才能,合理分配时刻,他们就能够从这些休闲活动中获益。范文如下:
However,spending too much time on TV and games may affect children's studyand health. Deeply attracted by entertaining TV programs and thrilling computergames,children tend to watch TV or play games for hours, neglecting theirhomework or coming exams. Also,too much time spent on TV or games could resultin weakened eyesight and lack of exercises.Nevertheless,with parents' help andinstructions,children can enhance their self-control and time-management,whichmeans they are able to use time in the proper way and benefit from these leisureactivities.
2) 当咱们写退让辩驳段时,咱们能够说反方观念适用于一些人或状况,可是不适用于另一些人或状况。
比方这个标题:Many people can now study at home through distance-learning programsvia the Internet or television. Some people say this kind of education cannot becompared to attending a college or university. To what extent do you agree ordisagree?
这个标题是对于远程教学和传统教学(上大学),假定咱们的反方是远程教学,那么退让辩驳段能够这么写:当然,咱们不能否定远程教学的长处和优点(便利省时、灵活性强),可是这种教学方式不适用于自控力比照差的学生,他们不能会集注意力学习,简单分神,学习作用差。范文如下:
On the other hand,we cannot deny the obvious benefits of remote educationwhich provides people with more flexibility and convenience. People could choosetheir favorite courses and decide when and where to study,following their ownpaces. Instead of wasting time on commuting,students could comfortably sit athome and learn a course on line. However,those students who lack self-controland self-discipline cannot learn efficiently in this way,as they might bedistracted by various kinds of things,such as games and videos on line.
期望备考雅思的辛达雅思代报童鞋们认真体会退让辩驳段的写法,多写多练。这个证明办法用的好,必定能够大大进步文章整体的证明力度和逻辑性,令考官眼前一亮,助你取得雅思写作高分!
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