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剑桥雅思11出书时刻虽不长,同学们力争上游做题的热情却非常高涨。作为备考雅思最新的教材,剑11确实有许多内容预示着雅思考试的新趋势。新的剑11中,雅思写作部分沿用剑4-10,只给出巨细各四篇文章。关于这仅有的雅思新题,备考辛达雅思代报的同学更应深度剖析,操练写作。
下面是由新东方吉林校园陈思佳教师带来的剑桥雅思11Test1 大作文的写作剖析,同学们能够学习大作文的写作思路。
WRITING TASK 2
Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
思路剖析:
政府:政府的责任是为公民服务,计划和施行城市建造
公路:主要是私家交通工具和中小型公共交通工具使用
铁路:运载量大,简直不会形成拥堵;可是建筑本钱较高,工程量大
ps:汉语思路:
高质量的英文写作包括三个方面:内容,逻辑和言语。所以组织好写作内容是写好作文的第一步。
而言语才是第二步,有了好的内容,咱们才干知道自个那些言语才能缺乏:词汇量小或许语法结构单一。那么终究如何写出好的作文内容呢?答案就在上面的思路剖析中,即关于名词概念的实质进行深度发掘,并从中找到逻辑联系,以后再完结作文的时分就会行云流水
汉语范文
或许是交通疑问现已困惑国际各国公民太久了,所以各国政府都纷繁在交通建造和改进方面做出了不小的尽力。可是关于政府花钱建造更多的铁路而不是公路这么的观念,我自己表明不能彻底拥护。
首要不得不供认,建造铁路某种程度上是一件利国利民的工作。究竟与其他运送方法对比,铁路运送的单位时刻内运载量是最大的,也是陆运速度最快的一种方法,一起因为铁路运送是依托强壮的运作体系来操控运转的,所以铁路运送简直不会发生交通拥堵的疑问。
可是,不管是铁路建造仍是公路建造应当取决于许多综合要素,比方城市开展规划,人员活动起伏,地址环境状况等等。关于国际级大都市来说,明显公路和铁路都扮演中相同主要的人物,一方面大城市要接收来自全国各地乃至国际各地的人员,所以在铁路方面必定要供给满足的便当。一起在这么的大城市日子的人,在平时出行方面也应当有必定的保证,所以公路建造也必不可少。相反,关于中等兴旺城市来说,具体状况也应当具体剖析,假如地理条件和资金条件都答应的状况下, 建造铁路并不是坏事,反而能给本地带来更多的开展机会。可是假如是规划对比小的城市,过多建造铁路明显含义并不大,究竟外来人员不多,或许人员活动密度不大。
此外,大家好像忽略了铁路运送在带来便当的一起,也意味着更高的出资本钱和更多的资本投入和更杂乱的运转体系的建立,这些都需求花费相当多的时刻和财政预算。在铁路建造过程中难免会形成更为严重的交通疑问,除非政府能对比合理地躲避这些潜在疑问,不然盲目建筑铁路绝对不是正确之选。
言而总之,到底是建铁路仍是建公路不能武断地做决议。城市开展必定特别本身开展规则,只要政府的基础设施建造是符合规则开展趋势的,那势必会满足大家日子需求带来料想的优点。相反,违反了规则或许会得到适得其反的效果。
英语范文:
或许是交通疑问现已困惑国际各国公民太久了,所以各国政府都纷繁在交通建造和改进方面做出了不小的尽力。可是关于政府花钱建造更多的铁路而不是公路这么的观念,我自己表明不能彻底拥护。
It is perhaps the long-disturbing traffic issue that drives governments all over the globe to make great efforts in establishing or improving their traffic system. Nevertheless, I still cannot be enrolled in the camp that claims it is wise to construct railway rather than roads. (45 words)
首要不得不供认,建造铁路某种程度上是一件利国利民的工作。究竟与其他运送方法对比,铁路运送的单位时刻内运载量是最大的,也是陆运速度最快的一种方法,一起因为铁路运送是依托强壮的运作体系来操控运转的,所以铁路运送简直不会发生交通拥堵的疑问。明显现实铁路建造是件有益的工作。
Undoubtedly, the railway construction, in a way, can be deemed as a win-win program for both the country and its citizens. After all, compared with other types of transportation, the transporting load of railage in a unit time is the largest and it is also the fastest approach of conveyance on land. Simultaneously, due to its strikingly strong operating system in running, it can scarcely entail any congestion. Evidently, it is advantageous to implement the plan referred to railway establishment. (80 words)
可是,不管是铁路建造仍是公路建造应当取决于许多综合要素,比方城市开展规划,人员活动起伏,地址环境状况等等。关于国际级大都市来说,明显公路和铁路都扮演中相同主要的人物,一方面大城市要接收来自全国各地乃至国际各地的人员,所以在铁路方面必定要供给满足的便当。一起在这么的大城市日子的人,在平时出行方面也应当有必定的保证,所以公路建造也必不可少。相反,关于中等兴旺城市来说,具体状况也应当具体剖析,假如地理条件和资金条件都答应的状况下, 建造铁路并不是坏事,反而能给本地带来更多的开展机会。可是假如是规划对比小的城市,过多建造铁路明显含义并不大,究竟外来人员不多,或许人员活动密度不大。
Rather, whether it is the rail or the road, the erection is in requirement of many other comprehensive elements, for example the scale of city development, the extent of population mobility, the condition of geographical surroundings and so forth. For those world-famous metropolis, like New York or Shanghai, both railroad and traffic-way are key in the city function. For one thing, major cities need to receive populations nationwide and even worldwide; thereby, sufficient convenience must be provided by perfect train system. Meanwhile, residents living in such a big city are supposed to be ensure with a relatively pleasant road-travel condition. However, for those middle-sized cities or towns,situations should differ according to different complex consideration. With the help of proper geography and adequate budgets, building railway should not be a malfeasance. Instead, it tends to introduce numerous opportunities for further development. Unfortunately, it seems not make sense for cities of limited scale to set up extensive railway, where, there are neither too much immigrating population nor too large population density after all. (173 words)
此外,辛达雅思代报发考生好像忽略了铁路运送在带来便当的一起,也意味着更高的出资本钱和更多的资本投入和更杂乱的运转体系的建立,这些都需求花费相当多的时刻和财政预算。在铁路建造过程中难免会形成更为严重的交通疑问,除非政府能对比合理地躲避这些潜在疑问,不然盲目建筑铁路绝对不是正确之选。
Additionally, do forget that along with the above sweeteners, rail service signifies a higher financial investment, a larger amount of resources as well as a much more complicated running system, all of which require a considerable number of time and budget. Besides, during the construction process, more severe traffic congestion is inevitable, unless the authorities can avoid these visible or potential issues and otherwise a blind construction of railway cannot be a wise choice. (74 words)
言而总之,到底是建铁路仍是建公路不能武断地做决议,仍是应当适应城市开展规则。
Overall, decision of whether to build should not be arbitrary, while it must be in accordance with laws of civil development. (21 words)
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