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下面辛达雅思代报频道为我们整理了实例分析：雅思大作文5分的因素，供考生们参阅，以下是具体内容。

　　Band 5

　　Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?

　　What knowledge and skills should universities provide has been argued for many years. Some people think that the true function of universities provide knowledge for their own purpose, but nowadays, more and more people point out that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills according to the workplace.

　　The first reason for universities should provide these knowledge and skill is the students’ needs. Obviously, the most of the students go to university purpose of is to get some knowledge and skills which could make them have the ability to get a job. If a university does not provide these knowledge and skills, the students might not get a job and they would be very disappointed. As a result, the university would lose its students.

　　Moreover, providing knowledge and skills needed in the workplace makes a university progress. The new skills and information always are initiated in the workplace, so focusing on the needs of the workplace the university could get sound strategies to do research and make it more modernization.

　　Lastly, providing these knowledge and skills could benefit our country which usually gives a financial support to universities. Having these knowledge and skills, students are more easy to get a job, and this can make our countries’ economy strong.

　　In conclusion, it can be said that providing the knowledge and skills which the workplace needs is every university’s basic function.

　　只能拿到5分的因素：

　　一、这个标题中有两方的观念：some 及others的，很明显这位考生在后面的证明过程中彻底忽略了others的观念,都在一味地证明some 的观念的正确性，所以考官给出的评语是：it does not address all parts of the question.

　　写作建议NO.3：Do not neglect any part, or you will regret your mark.

　　不要忽略任何东西，不然你的分数会让你很悲伤。

　　二、这位考生在连接词和杂乱句型上都表现得不错，但是他太偷闲了，knowledge and skill这个词组一共用了9次，这种高频率的repetition让这位考生付出了对比沉重的代价，所以看者期望你们可以汲取这么的经验，多留意Paraphrase的操练。尤其是常考的考试主题所也许涉及到的高频单词更是要做好homework. knowledge and skill就归于top 3 的高频考题的教育类，所以这类的词汇一定是多多预备才对，如 expertise, conversance, instruction, competence, aptitude, technique, prowess, dexterity 都可以拿来更换这两个词。

　　写作建议NO.4：Paraphrase helps you parachute into a higher band.

　　改写能助你拿到高分。