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达人在这里鼓舞考生们多重视时势,从中发掘有用的词、句和思路,为雅思考试写作有些的构思建立“知识库和资料库”,并使自个的文章在千千万万的“八股文”式的,“高谈阔论”式的空泛文章中锋芒毕露。 【时势聚集】
SEASCALE, England - A taxi driver drove his vehicle on a shooting spree across northwest England overnight, methodically killing 12 people and wounding 25 others before turning the gun on himself, officials said.
The rampage in the county of Cumbria was Britain's deadliest mass shooting since 1996 and it jolted a country where handguns are banned and multiple shootings rare.
The body of the suspected gunman, 52-year-old Derrick Bird, was found in woods near Boot, a hamlet popular with hikers and holidaymakers in England's hilly, scenic Lake District. Police said two weapons were recovered from the scene.
Eight of the wounded were in the hospital, with three of them in critical condition. Queen Elizabeth II, who rarely issues statements responding to the news, said she shared in "the grief and horror of the whole country" and passed on her sympathy to the families of the victims.
The shootings had "shocked the people of Cumbria and around the country to the core," Police Deputy Chief Constable Stuart Hyde said.
Police said it was too early to say what the killer's motive was, or whether the shootings had been random. Some reports said Bird had quarrelled with fellow cab drivers the night before the killings.
Peter Leder, a taxi driver who knew Bird, said he had seen the gunman Tuesday and didn't notice anything that was obviously amiss. But he was struck by Bird's departing words.
"When he left he said, 'See you Peter, but I won't see you again,"' Leder told Channel 4 News.
The first shootings were reported in the coastal town of Whitehaven, about 560 kilometres northwest of London. Witnesses said the dead there included two of Bird's fellow cabbies.
Police warned residents to stay indoors as they tracked the gunman's progress across the county. Witnesses described seeing the gunman driving around shooting from the window of his car.
Victims died in Seascale and Egremont, near Whitehaven, and in Gosforth, where a farmer's son was shot dead in a field. Workers at the nearby Sellafield nuclear processing plant were ordered to stay inside while the gunman was on the loose.
Hyde said there were 30 separate crime scenes. Many bodies remained on the ground late on Wednesday local time, covered with sheets, awaiting the region's small and overstretched force of forensic officers.
Barrie Walker, a doctor in Seascale who certified one of the deaths, told the BBC that victims had been shot in the face, apparently with a shotgun.
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上面这则新闻摘自http://www.nzherald.co.nz/,报导了从前发作在英国的严重枪击案子,的哥沿路杀死12人。此外,还引证了一些证人的证词还采访了这位的哥的熟人,企图剖析其杀人因素和动机。本来这则新闻和雅思写作谈论文中的许多论题都有有关,且其间有许多咱们在雅思写作中能够学习的思路乃至是直接引证的论据。
1. 说到这个杀人狂魔及这个令人惊惶的新闻,咱们不由会想起雅思在2010年1月30的谈论文考题,说到一个anti-social behavior“反社会”这个全新的概念,咱们无妨先来看一看这道标题:
Today there is a great increase in anti-social behavior and lack of respect to others. What are the causes of this phenomenon? What measures can be taken to reduce the problem?
初见这个标题,许多学生都无从下手,回答这个标题,必需求先弄懂anti-social behavior这个概念。如theft, vandalism, bullying, terrorism, drug abuse, gambling, rape, unmarried pregnancy, fraud等,而新闻中的这个的哥的杀人事情完全能够作为此题的一个详细的例子进行证明。
2. 下面,雅思达人主张考生能够从别的一个视点来剖析这个标题,在新闻中说到,的哥是在旅行景区枪击多名市民,所以和“旅行”有关的论题相联络是十分合理的。如2006年5月的A类谈论文:
International tourism has become a huge industry in the world. Are the problems exploring this resource causes greater than the advantages it brings?
本题评论国际旅行的优缺陷,考生基本会从经济,文化,环境等方面思考,而疏忽了安全的疑问。经过与本则新闻的联络,咱们能够经过一个全新的视角来剖析旅行的缺陷,即安全隐患疑问。
3. 再来一题是2009年6月19号对于“英国差人带着枪支”的疑问。咱们来看一下原题。
Unlike most other countries, the police in the UK do not commonly carry guns. Some people think this practice leaves citizens unprotected, others believe it could reduce the overall violence in the society. Discuss both sides of the view and give your own opinion.
当然英国差人带枪是看情况而定的,而与上则新闻的联络点在于从正面来说:差人带枪能制止暴力事情的再度恶化,而从不和来说:带枪风险,且罪犯许多是激动情况下违法,需求的是交流而不是另一次暴力事情。
【精彩片段】
下面咱们回到方才的那则新闻摘要中,重视其间对雅思写作构思及言语有帮助的精彩片段:
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The rampage in the county of Cumbria was Britain's deadliest mass shooting since 1996 and it jolted a country where handguns are banned and multiple shootings rare.
这次撒野事情是英国自1996年以来最丧命的大众枪击事情,这次事情使这个制止带着枪支和枪击事情很少发作的国家震动。经过这句话,咱们发现了英国在枪支的一个规定,即民众是不能带着枪支的,这个也是英国差人能够自由选择是不是带着枪的重要因素。
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Police said it was too early to say what the killer's motive was, or whether the shootings had been random. Some reports said Bird had quarrelled with fellow cab drivers the night before the killings.
差人标明如今来判断杀手的动机还为时过早,且不易断定其是不是无计划无谋划的。一些报导指出其曾在杀人前和同行超过嘴。这个能够理解为杀人事情发作的一个重要因素,即与同行产生纠纷。
【高分词汇】
最终,雅思达人为我们整理了此则新闻中能用于雅思大作文的词汇。
shooting spree 张狂射击
rampage n. (在街上)橫冲直撞,撒野
deadliest mass shooting 最丧命的大众射击
suspected gunman 可疑的持枪歹徒
issue statements 发表声明
on the loose 逍遥法外
in critical condition 在危机情况下
总之,雅思达人在这里鼓舞考生们多重视时势,从中发掘有用的词、句和思路,为雅思考试写作有些的构思建立“知识库和资料库”,并使自个的文章在千千万万的“八股文”式的,“高谈阔论”式的空泛文章中锋芒毕露,让考官立即对自个刮目相看:“哇!这真是一个“与时俱进”,有着“国际化视界”的雅思优异考生!”
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