文化和生活对雅思写作的影响


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When we learn a language, we should also learn the cultures and lifestylesof this country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  There is no doubt that when you begin to learn a language, both culturesand lifestyles are indispensable for learning. Only learning cultrues andlifestyles can you have a good commond of what you learn.

  构造剖析:1+1’的形式,最终一句是主题句。疑问仍是有的,比方榜首句是介绍标题布景,但好像写得和标题仍是太像了,最好是可以改换的程度再大些。而最终一句表达观念的主题句却有显着的语法过错和拼写过错。所以起评分也只能在5-6分之间了。值得一提的是,作者首段给人的感受文章对比简练,不像有的文章为了凑字数,废话许多。

  First of all, cultures paly a big role in languages. Colloquial phrases arepleasant to the ear, not only because they are familiar, but also because theyreflect a unique aspect of a culture which is a symbol of countries or livingareas. So necessary do you learn cultures first when you determine to learn anew language.

  构造剖析:作者仍是一向地遵循简练的写作个性,给人感受构造十分清晰,作者的写作目的和内容也十分简单把握。需求指出的是,作者很显着在榜首段和这段的最终一句话都妄图想用倒装句来增加言语的多样性,惋惜的是都错了!!!看来倒装句没有学好,呵呵。。。

  In addition, some special languages in Canada and Austrilia have words thatreflect a way of life that is connected close to the Earth. There are fiftydifferent words that mean `snow` in one Canadian native language. Various locallanguages have been evolved through human`s lifes and have been continuing tochange step by step. If we expect to learn the most aboriginal languages,lifestyles count for learning.

  构造剖析:此段好像没有太显着的句型过错,可是词汇过错却多了(如赤色有些)。内容仍是一向地很简单把握。

  When you make a decision to learn languages, a good advice recommended toyou is that living with the local people whose mother language is what you willlearn, can communicate with you frequently. In this way can you learn languagesquickly ,efficiently and authoritatively.

  构造剖析:值得表彰的是此段最终一句倒装句总算用对了。可是,赤色有些,即榜首句因为妄图运用杂乱句,致使呈现了很严重的了解疑问,这是一大败笔!

  To sum up, learning languages is not a simple task but a process of knowingdifferent cultures and customs. So, to get involved in the cultures andlifestyles can make your learning happily .I am sure that you will enjoy everyminute of learning languages. ( 251words )

  构造剖析:最终一段有一个小过错,其他都还好,归于中规中矩的写法。

  总评:整篇文章个性对比显着,就是简练(和雅思代报以前发布的文章不太一样)和喜爱运用倒装句和定语从句。看得出来,作者是故意在夸耀自个现已把握的句型。

  缺陷么也很显着,对某些词汇的用法把握地很欠好,对某些句型的精确度也有待进步。





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