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雅思写作想获得高分要有必定的写作功底,从词汇、句型、语法到文章结构都必须写得很好。而语法常常是我们比较头疼的一个点,想要写出一篇好作文,挑选
恰当的语法结构是非常重要的。下面就和辛达雅思代报小编一起来看看。
挑选适宜的语法结构可以使语句意思的表达更为精确和简练。尽管语法的多样性也很重要,但挑选比较恰当的语法结构仍然是更为重要的考虑要素。以下准
则是在考虑挑选何种语法结构时可以参考的准则:
1.一个语句的主语和谓语动词应该可以反映语句中的比较重要的意思。
例如:Thesituation that resulted in my grandfather's not being able to study engineeringwas that his father needed help on the farm。
从意思上来剖析,上面这句话需求表达的重要的概念是“grandfather'snot being able to study”,而在表达这个概念时,原句用的主语是situation,谓语动词
是was,不能着重需求表达的重点概念,可以改为下面这句话:
Mygrandfather couldn't study engineering because his father needed help on thefarm。
2.避免频频运用“there be”结构
例如下面的语句:Therewere 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It was hardwork for my grandfather。
可以改为:Mygrandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day。
更简练的句式为:Mygrandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily。
3.把从句改为短语或单词。
例如:Dairycows were raised on the farm, which was located100 kilometers from the nearestuniversity and was in an area that was remote。
简介的表达方式为:Thedairy farm was located in a remote area, 100 kilometers to the nearestuniversity。
4.仅在需求着重宾语而不是主语的时候,才运用被动语态。
例如:Inthe fall, not only did the cows have to be milked, but also the hay was mowedand stacked by my grandfather's family。
本句不行简练的原因是本句的重心应该是“忙碌的家庭-mygrandfather's family”,而运用了被动语态後,彷佛重心变成了cows和hay。下面的表达方式是自动
语态,相对来说更简练一些:
Inthe fall, my grandfather's family not only milked the cow but also mowed andstacked the hay。
5.用更为精确的一个动词来替代动词短语。
例如:Mygrandfather didn't have time to stand around doing nothing with his schoolfriends。
Standaround doing nothing其实可以用一个动词来表达,即loiter:
Mygrandfather didn't have time to loiter with his school friends。
6.有时两句话的信息通过组合完全可以用一句话来简练地表达。
例如:Profitsfrom the farm were not large. Sometimes they were too small to meet theexpenses of running a farm. They were not sufficient to pay for a
universitydegree。
两句话的信息可以合并为下面这句更为简练的语句:Profitsfrom the farm were sometimes too small to meet operational expenses, let alonepay for a
university degree。
以上就是雅思写作怎么挑选恰当的语法结构的相关内容,希望可以帮助到各位考生的备考。
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