你知道雅思考官最讨厌的雅思写作开头吗?(1)


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为什么雅思写作考试分数那么低?为什么备考了那么多技巧还是没有办法?这其间很有可能是你的写作开头达不到考官的标准,并且是考官厌烦的那一种开头。

那么,以下辛达雅思代报小编就带我们一同来看一下考官不喜欢的雅思开头开头有哪些。


       一、中式英语


  厌烦指数:★★★★★


  上榜理由:用中式英文开头,不仅会让考官看不懂,还暴露了你的言语功底,语料积累匮乏,是雅思写作中的大忌。


  比方:


  写作主题 1:The happiest moment in your life


  事例:In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……


  写作主题 2:The population problem


  事例:The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people 

sea there.


  写作主题 3:Is there fairness in today’s business world?


  事例:I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……


  二、胡乱翻译我国俗话


  厌烦指数:★★★★★


  上榜理由:胡乱翻译我国俗话会起反作用,毕竟考官对我国俗话并不“伤风”,反而会引起考官反感。


  比方:


  写作主题 1:Is it good to have a large family?


  事例:I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……


  写作主题 2:Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?


  事例:Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole……


  写作主题 3:The advantage of being a nice person


  事例:I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people always say: “Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”.


  三、超级烦琐


  厌烦指数:★★★★☆


  上榜理由:开篇就要主题明晰明晰,上来就啰烦琐嗦表达不清,考官天然认为你的观念含糊,甚至不会表达。


  比方:


  写作主题 1:Should college students be allowed to get married?


  事例:This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not 

married……


  写作主题 2:Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information?


  事例:Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses 

internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.


小编找到的是作者的一些见解,希望可以为考生们寻找到最好得分方式,也希望对大家有所帮助。最后,希望广大考生们在备考过程中提升自己的语言水平,取得更好的成绩。

有需要代报考位的同学们,可以直接联系我们,辛达雅思代报竭诚为您服务。(*^__^*)



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