雅思大作文都有哪些高分诀窍?(下)


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       技巧三:运用正确的语法结构

  选择适合的语法结构可以使句子意思的表达更为准确和简练。尽管语法的多样性也很重要,但选择最恰当的语法结构仍然是更为重要的考虑要素。以下原则是在考虑选择何种语法结构时可以参阅的原则:


  1.一个句子的主语和谓语动词应该可以反映句子中的最重要的意思。

  例如:The situation that resulted in my grandfather's not being able to study engineering was that his father needed help on the farm。


  从意思上来分析,上面这句话需求表达的重要的概念是“grandfather's not being able to study”,而在表达这个概念时,原句用的主语是situation,谓语动词是was,不能偏重需求表达的要点概念,可以改为下面这句话:

  My grandfather couldn't study engineering because his father needed help on the farm。


  2.防止一再运用“there be”结构

  例如下面的句子:There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It was hard work for my grandfather。

  可以改为:

  My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day。


  更简练的句式为:

  My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily。


  3.把从句改为短语或单词。

  例如:Dairy cows were raised on the farm, which was located100 kilometers from the nearest university and was in an area that was remote。


  简介的表达方式为:

  The dairy farm was located in a remote area, 100 kilometers to the nearest university。


  4.仅在需求偏重宾语而不是主语的时分,才运用被动语态。

  例如:In the fall, not only did the cows have to be milked, but also the hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfather's family。


  本句不可简练的原因是本句的重心应该是“繁忙的家庭-my grandfather's family”,而运用了被动语态後,彷佛重心变成了cows和hay。下面的表达方式是自动语态,相对来说更简练一些:

  In the fall, my grandfather's family not only milked the cow but also mowed and stacked the hay。


  5.用更为准确的一个动词来代替动词短语,

  例如:My grandfather didn't have time to stand around doing nothing with his school friends。

  Stand around doing nothing其实可以用一个动词来表达,即loiter:

  My grandfather didn't have time to loiter with his school friends。


  6.有时两句话的信息通过组合彻底可以用一句话来简练地表达

  例如:Profits from the farm were not large. Sometimes they were too small to meet the expenses of running a farm. They were not sufficient to pay for a university degree。


  两句话的信息可以合并为下面这句更为简练的句子:

  Profits from the farm were sometimes too small to meet operational expenses, let alone pay for a university degree。


  以上就是雅思写作大作文高分技巧有哪些的相关内容,希望可以帮忙到各位烤鸭的备考。


小编找到的是作者的一些见解,希望可以为考生们寻找到最好得分方式,也希望对大家有所帮助。最后,希望广大考生们在备考过程中提升自己的语言水平,取得更好的成绩。

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