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见过太多考生的雅思作文,读下来的最大感触,不是语法错误,逻辑不清,而是通篇很勉强,很极端的态度和观念,让人读了之后十分不舒服。我想,作为考官,读了一个"there is no doubt that..."之后,很有或许就要心生一种厌恶感,假如正好ta有doubt了,那怎么办?你用这样的话是要轻视雅思考官的智商么?尤其是关于雅思写作task2的最常见的一种题型“Do you agree or disagree?”或者说“To what extent do you agree or disagree?”,除了许多烤鸭比较惯性思维的挑选”agree“和"disagree"之外,其实还有一种十分适宜的态度挑选:partly agree。不偏不倚,妥妥当当,用中国老话来说,是中庸,用西方言语讲叫balanced。
例如,考题问“现在许多人用动物做实验,你赞同吗?”,考生能够在文中分别评论支持和反对动物实验的理由,最后提出动物实验既有优点也有坏处,这便是一种“折衷”观念。除此之外,作者还提出了是否能用动物来做实验主要是取决于实验是否能给人类日子带来明显的改善(比方协助人类发明治疗Aids的药物),这就属于“折衷”方案。
“折衷观念”和“折衷方案”的几种方式
那么怎样提出“折衷观念”呢?“折衷方案”又有哪几种方式呢?下面辛达雅思代报小编将对常见的三种安排折衷观念和折衷方案的方式,结合相应的考题进行总结。
1)兴利除弊
“兴利除弊”应该是一种比较简单的折衷方案,在优缺点类文章中特别常用。即在剖析完考题所涉及事物的优缺点之后,在结尾段提出“优缺点都有,咱们要兴利除弊”这样的折衷方案。例如以下考题:The advantages brought by the spread of English as a “global language” will outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
在评论完英语作为全球性言语的利与弊之后,结尾段能够这样提出折衷观念:
To sum up, it is difficult to tell whether or not the advantages outweigh the disadvantages regarding the spread of English as a global language. What we may have to consider is how to accept this trend as positive while at the same time staying away from its drawbacks.
2)平衡发展
许多考题需求考生评论两种观念,通常会有“discuss both views and give your own opinion”这样的发问要求。许多情况下,文中提到的两种观念表面上看来是完全相反,但其实并不矛盾,能够用“平衡发展”的思路来提出观念。例如考题:Some people think that cultural traditions may be destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others believe it is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss on both sides and give your opinion.
在评论完发展旅行的必要性和维护文化传统的重要性之后,结尾段能够这样提出折衷方案:
We should find the right balance between tourism development and cultural protection and I believe the government has a very important role to play here. In my own country, for example, many tourist cities have made effective development plans to successfully attract large numbers of visitors while still preserving their distinct cultural traditions.
有时在评论完A和B两种观念今后,能够提出类似于“赞同A仍是B要取决于……”这样的折衷观念,前文讲到的动物实验是否能够进行取决于实验的性质便是属于这样的方案。再比方下面这个例子:Some people think that the animals should be treated as pets; others think that animals are sources of food and clothing. What is your opinion?
在评论完动物当宠物养的理由和动物当食物吃的理由之后,结尾段能够这样提出观念:
From my point of view, there is no absolute answer as to whether animals should be treated like pets or as sources of food and clothes. It largely depends on what kinds of animals they are. But what remains undoubted is that we should treat animals with a humane attitude and bear in mind that they are important in preserving nature’s ecological equilibrium.
3)解决方法
许多双边评论型文章中所评论的两种观念其实是能够通过某种方案来“化解矛盾”的,例如这道考题:In many countries, good schools and medical facilities are available only in cities. Some people think new teachers and doctors should wok in rural areas for a few years, but others think everyone should be free to choose where they work. Discuss and give your own opinion.
在评论完“支边”的利(缩小城乡距离)与弊(年轻人损失自在)之后,咱们能够提出这样一种解决方案:
The best solution, therefore, is not to order, but to encourage. We should instill a sense of responsibility in young people and give more incentives to those who are willing to work in difficult areas, so that we can address the problem of urban-rural disparity while respecting whatever decisions new teachers or doctors have made.
小编找到的是作者的一些见解,希望可以为考生们寻找到最好得分方式,也希望对大家有所帮助。最后,希望广大考生们在备考过程中提升自己的语言水平,取得更好的成绩。
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