雅思写作之让步反驳段小技巧


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雅思写作退让辩驳段一般用于证明中的反方段,也便是咱们不太支撑的那一方观念。在写反方段时,首要,咱们要进行退让,供认反方观念存在必定的合理性,

进行解释阐明,然后笔锋一转,进行辩驳。要记住:退让要让的充分,辩驳要辩驳的有力。让咱们来看看一篇剑桥雅思官方范文中的退让辩驳段。

  雅思写作标题:In many countries students have a break to travel or work for a year fromstudy after they graduate from school. Do the advantages 

outweigh the disadvantages?

  这篇文章的话题是gap year,在范文的正方段中,考官支撑gap year, 认为这种做法优点多多,应该鼓励,然后考官写反方段,也便是gap year的坏处,这

个段落便是一个典型的退让辩驳段,详细如下:

  However,there are certainly dangers in taking time off at this important age. Young adultsmay end up never returning to their school,or finding it 

difficult to readapt to an academicenvironment. They may think that it is better to continue in a particular job or to dosomething completely different from a 

university course.But overall,I think this is less likelytoday,when academic qualifications are essential for getting a reasonable career.

  剖析一下,考官首要供认gap year有坏处和问题,由于阅历了gap year之后,有些学生有或许改变人生方向,不愿回到校园学习了,或者即使回校学习,也

很难适应学术环境。然后,考官笔锋一转,说可是在现在的社会,上述情况和问题不太或许发生,由于如果想找到好工作、事业有成,学历是至关重要的。这个

退让辩驳段就写的非常好,使得整篇文章证明更加有力,逻辑性更强,这篇文章无疑是高分之作。

  不少同学感觉退让辩驳段比较难写,不知道从什么角度辩驳。辛达雅思代报小编在这里总结了一些行之有效的辩驳办法和辩驳角度:

  1) 当咱们辩驳坏处时,咱们能够说坏处和问题发生的或许性小,正如方才剖析的考官范文。此外,咱们还能够说坏处是能够处理或者能够转化的。

  比如这个标题:Some people believe that time spent on television,video and computer gamescan be beneficial to children. Others believe that this has 

negative effects on a child. Discussboth views and give your own opinion. 这个标题是关于儿童看电视打游戏的利害,假定咱们的反方是看电视打游戏的坏处,

那么退让辩驳段能够这么写: 不可否认,儿童看电视、打游戏存在坏处和问题(如影响视力和学习、容易上瘾),可是这些问题是能够处理的:只要父母帮助儿童

提高自控能力,合理分配时刻,他们就能够从这些休闲活动中获益。范文如下:

  However,spending too much time on TV and games may affect children's study andhealth. Deeply attracted by entertaining TV programs and thrilling 

computer games,childrentend to watch TV or play games for hours, neglecting their homework or coming exams.Also,too much time spent on TV or 

games could result in weakened eyesight and lack ofexercises.Nevertheless,with parents' help and instructions,children can enhance their self-control and 

time-management,which means they are able to use time in the proper way andbenefit from these leisure activities.

  2) 当咱们写退让辩驳段时,咱们能够说反方观念适用于一些人或情况,可是不适用于另一些人或情况。

  比如这个标题:Many people can now study at home through distance-learning programs viathe Internet or television. Some people say this kind of 

education cannot be compared toattending a college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  这个标题是关于远程教育和传统教育(上大学),假定咱们的反方是远程教育,那么退让辩驳段能够这么写:当然,咱们不能否认远程教育的长处和优点(方便

省时、灵活性强),可是这种教育办法不适用于自控力比较差的学生,他们不能会集注意力学习,容易分神,学习效果差。范文如下:

  On the other hand,we cannot deny the obvious benefits of remote education whichprovides people with more flexibility and convenience. People could 

choose their favoritecourses and decide when and where to study,following their own paces. Instead of wastingtime on commuting,students could 

comfortably sit at home and learn a course on line.However,those students who lack self-control and self-discipline cannot learn efficiently inthis way,as 

they might be distracted by various kinds of things,such as games and videos online.

  希望备考雅思的童鞋们仔细领会退让辩驳段的写法,多写多练。这个证明办法用的好,必定能够大大提高文章整体的证明力度和逻辑性,令考官眼前一亮,

助你取得雅思写作高分!


小编找到的是作者的一些见解,希望可以为考生们寻找到最好得分方式,也希望对大家有所帮助。最后,希望广大考生们在备考过程中提升自己的语言水平,取得更好的成绩。

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