雅思写作语料:专才教育和通才教育(下)


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三段:反驳段:通才教育的利好

However,I want to rebut that specialized education is not universally suitable for the vast majority of students. Conversely, a person who has studied a wide 

range of subjects could,to a larger extent,realize his or her all-round development. More precisely, people will enlarge their scope of knowledge and 

broaden their mental horizons. Another convincing argument is that the cultivations of a variety of competences could help one make full preparations for 

work in different fields,by contrast,a man who just zero in on the subjects he or she takes interest in will have to face more risks of unemployment triggered by a single career choice

【解析】

1. is not universally suitable for v不是遍及合适……

2. realize his or her all-round development. v实现全面的开展

3. have to face more risks of unemployment triggered by a single career choice v面对单一职业选择带来的赋闲的风险

尾段:再次亮明观念 + 总结理由

In closing,I re-affirm my conviction that compared with focusing on career-oriented courses,taking various courses is more feasible and rational because it

 helps students realize comprehensive development and foster more personal talents. Further, our society need talents with a wealth of knowledge, so, a 

person who study many courses will enhance the competitiveness in the future job-seeking.

【解析】

1. is more feasible and rational 愈加的可行和理性

2. enhance the competitiveness in the future job-seeking. 进步未来择业的竞争力

【范文赏析】(2)

首段:布景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家态度

A man without education is a victim of adversity, however, educationalists have been pondering, for many years, which one is more preferable, specialized 

education or comprehensive education.Convincing arguments could be explored to justify both sides. As I see it, it is of immense value for students to receive 

the comprehensive education to enhance one’s all-round abilities.

【解析】

A man without education is a victim of adversity. 一个没有受过教育的人是逆境的牺牲品。

二段:专才教育的利好

Granted, those who support the specialized education do have reasons to some extent. For one thing, it is extremely efficient for the learners to acquire 

knowledge more effectively when applying themselves to only one subject. For another, it exerts a beneficial impact on the future job-hunting, for the 

specialists can definitely meet the demand of some enterprises. The training of athletes, cooks and other professionals can serve as perfect examples.


【解析】

1. applying themselves to only one subject 只专注学习一门课程

2. athletes, cooks and other professionals 运动员,厨师或者其他的专业人士

三段:通才教育的利好

Nonetheless, on no account could we ignore the immense value of general education. First, acquiring divergent subjects could help enlarge ones’ knowledge

 scope and foster more competences.Still, by means of all-round learning, it can add spice to students’ dull routine of daily life. It is conceivable that one can 

cultivate various hobbies and talents as a generalist. Last, knowledge is not a burden. Acquiring a wide range of subjects could enable one to better prepare 

him or her for the future career challenges because the moral education and character-training it covers could be beneficial to ones’ growth

【解析】

1. add spice to students’ dull routine of daily life. 增加生活的趣味

2. moral education and character-training 道德教育和性情培育

尾段:亮明观念

In closing, it is fairly difficult to say that the special education is the better way to cultivate the youngsters. My view is that everyone could benefit a 

great deal from the general learning, both psychologically and intellectually.


【语料库】

1. generalist n通才

2. specialist n专才

3. specialized education n专才教育

4. comprehensive education n通才教育

5. acquire a range of subjects v学习广泛的课程

6. acquire a wealth of knowledge v 学习很多的常识

7. travel in the ocean of the knowledge v畅游常识的海洋

8. avoid the possible risk of unemployment v 避免赋闲的风险

9. knowledge is not a kind of burden 艺多不压身

10. help one be well-prepared for the future career challenges 帮助一个人习惯未来事业的应战


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