如何提炼雅思大作文的观点?


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考生们都知道雅思考官在评判一篇高文文时,除了看文章的结构和言语之外,还很重视这篇文章的主体内容。而中国考生在写essay时常见的一个问题恰恰是考前预备了言语,临场读懂了题目,很快形成了观念,但是却不知该从哪些视点来支持自己的thesis statement。

  所以主体阶段观念单调,思维陈腐,内容空洞,为到达字数而把一个观念写了再写等问题常常会充斥在文章的body part。这极大地影响了考生的作文成绩。在此,辛达雅思代报小编分享一个笔者将多年积累的雅思高文文常见观点总结为一首打油诗,以飨读者。


  论文观念视点多;

  肉体魂灵不放过;

  权力相等要把握;

  文明品德思路扩;

  结合论题多思索;


  科技和经济

  在雅思论文主体部分写作中,科技视点是运用频率最高的视点。绝大多数作文的论题都可以从科技发展对人的生活带来的影响这个视点来加以分析。例如:

  评论是否将动物用于科学实验:

  Development of science and technology has given birth to materialism and capitalism which favor the research for economic growth and freedom of men. Consequently, no spiritual, moral, and traditional values are taken into account.


  压力大的原因:


  亲情冷漠的原因:

  The availability of a great variety of high-tech recreational facilities also diverts people from enjoying chats with the members of their families.

  Developing countries lack sufficient numbers of qualified scientists and other skilled personnel to cope with the increasingly serious environmental problems, such as the ozone depletion, the marine pollution and the like.

  The development of the telephone created a new market for the employment of women. The position of telephone operators was most often filled by women, creating a new world of opportunities for females to struggle for the equal rights to males.

  Another common disadvantage is that playing too much on the computer can cause bad eyesight.

  1.高频率的信息切换影响孩子们的耐性。

  There is not deny in that with the advent of technology, our patience grows thin.

  Media violence affects children by: increasing aggressiveness and anti-social behavior; intensifying their fear of becoming victims; making them less sensitive to violence and to victims of violence; encouraging their appetite for more violence in entertainment and in real life.

  For lack of face-to-face contact, modern children tend to be more introverted, unsocial, isolated and indifferent than those kids in last century.


  权力和相等

  四方的文明在必定程度上可以浓缩为:权力、相等和自在。中国考生在人们该不该做什么事情或行为的时候应该多从这个方面去说服考官。

  在写到环境的重要性时,可以说:

  All human beings have the fundamental right to an environment adequate for their health and well-being.

  在写到小孩子是否应该对自己犯的罪负责时,可以说:

  在写到传统的西方品德中对私有财产的尊重时,可以说:

  运动员是否应该拿高薪:

  Young people’s inexperience and gullibility easily lead then into traps. (个人的原因)


  文明和品德

  文明和品德本来就是雅四高文文中较难的两个论题,而近来这两个论题考的频率又很高。考生不防也从这两个视点来预备一下主体阶段的观念。


  反对强势文明入侵:

  Globalization might undermine cultural diversity. Multinational corporations promote a certain kind of consumerist culture, in which standard commodities, promoted by global marketing campaigns exploiting basic material desires, create similar lifestyles, which is so-called Coca-Colanization.

  The dishonest practice of telling lies will produce a perverse impact on one’s personality.

  总之,在高文文的主体阶段写作过程中,考生可以将以上的思路结合题目的特色归纳使用,切忌生搬硬套。平常在读文章时也要多总结别人的观念视点,而后为我所用。这样定能让你逐步形成西方的思维习惯,在考试中能才思泉涌,下笔有神。


小编找到的是作者的一些见解,希望可以为考生们寻找到最好得分方式,也希望对大家有所帮助。最后,希望广大考生们在备考过程中提升自己的语言水平,取得更好的成绩。

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