雅思小作文高分小技巧:灵活运用简单词


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其实人们关于“妖怪”形象的知道与咱们关于“雅思图表小作文”的正确知道有着异曲同工之处。日本的妖怪文化经历了从夸张(即极善极恶)到朴素(即 善恶并

存)的一种趋向和谐的开展,妖怪被赋予了天然的灵性,从而演变为了一种无法代替的文化;而咱们的小作文同样要做到表达的和谐才会使咱们在学习中一点一滴

的堆集,变成考官眼中那一个个生灵活现的“小妖怪”。

  现在,雅思考试中的小作文的资料也是越发“朴素”了,咱们或许觉得题目中不像之前会有一些自己不认得的冷僻单词;那么关于词汇的要求是不是降低了?

答案当时是“No”.而是咱们的词汇需要“灵性”了。

  咱们一起来和辛达雅思代报小编看看评分标准中9分档关于词汇的要求——use a wide range of vocabulary with very natural and sophisticated 

control of lexical features; rare minor errors occur only as “slips”. “natural and sophisticated control of lexical resources of lexical features”即

“天然运用并且把握词汇特征”,词汇的高分不是来源于“又难又专的高大上”而是 “妖怪一般的灵性”。这也便是为什么有的时候你的全文用了7,8种改变

多端的“占有”相关表达、或许用了更多的“上升、下降”可是分数却不见实质性改动的根本原因。下面让咱们经过剑桥雅思7 Test4的一篇考官范文来发现其

中的奥妙吧。

  The charts compare the sources of electricity in Australia and France in the years 1980 and 2000. Between these years electricity production 

almost doubled, rising from 100 units to 170 in Australia, and from 90 to 180 units in France.

  妖怪1:double,triple这一类型的词汇表现出了更为形象的数值自身的改变,比单纯的“上升、下降更为精确”,同时又比“上升,下降+数值”更加简

洁。精确并且简洁的表达完全可以称的上是 “natural and sophisticated control of lexical resources of lexical features”的境地

  In 1980 Australia used coal as the main electricity source (50 units) and the remainder was produced from natural gas, hydro power (each 

producing 20 units) and oil (which produced only 10 units). By 2000, coal had become the fuel for more than 75% of electricity produced and only 

hydro continued to be another significant source supplying approximately 20%.

  妖怪2: produce, supply这些简略的动词是与“能量”对应数值最恰当的调配方式,并不是咱们经常记忆的那些“占有”,因而小作文中咱们将常会遇

到调查的描绘目标或许是“能量”或许“食物的销量”,与这些最合适的调配应该是这些“灵气满满”的动词 produce,supply或许是 buy,sell,consume

  In contrast, France used coal as a source for only 25 units of electricity in 1980, which was matched by natural gas. The remaining 40 units 

were produced largely from oil and nuclear power, with hydro contributing only 5 units. But by 2000 nuclear power, which was not used at all 

Australia, had developed into the main source, producing almost 75% of electricity, at 126 units, while coal and oil together produced only 50 

units. Other sources were no longer significant.

  妖怪3:A be matched by B 即A=B

  妖怪4: contribute=produce

  妖怪5:develop ,某一个描绘目标所对应的数值变得更主导了,咱们可以用develop 写出这里所呈现的正向开展

  Overall, it is clear that by 2000 these two countries relied on different principal fuel sources: Australia relied on coal and France on nuclear 

power.

  妖怪6:rely on,depend on 表达的是“运用量大”的终极总结。

  这些词汇其实大家在接触,account for,constitute,之前早已把握,只是还没有发现他们在小作文中的天然用途吧,从今天起,这些词汇也出现在你的文

章中把,让考官惊叹一下,本来咱们的文章中也会出现这些灵动的词汇小妖怪!


小编找到的是作者的一些见解,希望可以为考生们寻找到最好得分方式,也希望对大家有所帮助。最后,希望广大考生们在备考过程中提升自己的语言水平,取得更好的成绩。

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