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许多学生在霸占了词汇语法以及审题难关后，雅思写作还是5-5.5分，很大一部分原因是由于“Coherence and Cohesion(联接和连接)”的把握欠佳。花了大量的时

间去回忆类似于consequently, admittedly的关联词，恨不得每一句前面都加一个自己觉得适宜的连接词。辛达雅思代报小编指出这种做法并不契合评分标准，会

被定义为过度运用联接成分，适宜的运用方法应该是这样的：

　　剑桥雅思真题9的一篇考官范文，一起来看看 “连接和联接”的运用。

　　标题：Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would 

have little effect on public health and other measures are required.

　　Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

　　A problem of modern societies is the declining level of health in the general

　　population, with conflicting views on how to tackle this worrying trend.

　　经过代词this的运用使得“现象”与大众对现象的看法发生了联接，清晰简洁，不留痕迹做到了评分准则中的“uses cohesion in such a way that it attracts no 

attention”

　　One possible solution is to provide more sports facilities to encourage a more

　　lifestyle.

　　经过 “one possible”写出了后文还会提到提到其他的解决方案，然后表现了后文在分段和内容上与总观念的对应，即评分准则中的”skilfully manages paragraphing“

　　Advocates of this believe that today’s sedentary lifestyle and stressful working

　　经过this的运用把主体段与“首段”紧密联络起来

　　conditions mean that physical activity is no longer part of either our work or our

　　leisure time. If there were easy-to-reach local sports centres, we would be more

　　经过关于要害词的润饰进一步证明了观点中触及的要害重心内容，表现了内容的深化，论据与观念的联接(即增多“sports facilities”的第一个原因：需要让大

众更便利做运动)

　　likely to make exercise a regular part of our lives, rather than just collapsing in front of a screen every evening. The variety of sports that could be offered would

　　效果同上“经过关于要害词的润饰进一步证明了观点中触及的要害重心内容，表现了内容的深化，论据与观念的联接”(即增多“sports facilities”的第二个原

因：需要满意更多人的需求)，两个原因之间并没有僵硬的运用“Firstly, Secondly”

　　cater for all ages, levels of fitness and interests: those with painful memories of PE at school might be happier in the swimming pool than on the football 

pitch.

　　However, there may be better ways of tackling this problem. Interest in sport is

　　经过代词”this ”的运用，是的此段观念与标题相联络(即在此段会写出“other possible ways”),并且与上一段形成并排关系

　　not universal, and additional facilities might simply attract the already fit, not

　　those who most need them. Physical activity could be encouraged relatively

　　cheaply, for example by installing exercise equipment in parks, as my local council has done. This has the added benefit that parents and children often 

use them

　　“This”替代前面的办法，前后句之间因此发生紧密联络

　　together just for fun, which develops a positive attitude to exercise at an early age.

　　“which”替代前面所描述的“添加equipment”的直接影响，使主句和从句，直接影响和间接影响发生联络

　　As well as physical activity, high tax penalties could be imposed on high-fat food

　　products, tobacco and alcohol, as excessive consumption of any of these

　　(一般连接词“as”后接原因) (“these”代词的运用加强主从句之间的联络)

　　contributes to poor health. Even improving public transport would help: it takes

　　longer to walk to the bus stop than to the car.

　　In my opinion, focusing on sports facilities is too narrow an approach and would

　　not have the desired results. People should be encouraged not only to be more

　　physically active but also to adopt a healthier lifestyle in general.

　　经过以上的剖析可以看出，考官是很少运用明显僵硬的连接词的，而是经过紧扣观点的论据分类，代词的精确使用以及观点与分观点的内容照应到达“不留

痕迹，分段得当”的状态的。同学们要做到“连接与联接”的完美展示，小编建议大家把握 “代词”的灵敏使用和内容的彼此联络才是真谛。

小编找到的是作者的一些见解，希望可以为考生们寻找到最好得分方式，也希望对大家有所帮助。最后，希望广大考生们在备考过程中提升自己的语言水平，取得更好的成绩。

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