如何在雅思写作中借鉴范文的精髓转化为自己的内容?


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如何才能把一篇优异的文章消化成自己的词库和句库,并写好雅思作文呢?辛达雅思代报小编在此为大家做详细的解说。

  学习就像饮食,健康的饮食是摄入与吸收偏重,许多鸭鸭现已对写作结构十分了解了,那么恭喜你,你现已进入写作学习的第二个阶段:言语积累和应用。吸收好的文章是提高表达多样性和表达难度最快的方法。那么如何才能把一篇优异的文章消化成自己的词库和句库呢!请按如下过程:


  1.最好预备优质范文的word版2画出自己认识可是写作的时分又想不到用的表达

  2.生词和表达多样性要独自罗列在段落下面,方便总结

  3.翻译成正常的汉语5看着汉语翻译英语(write it down)6对照原文找差异,尤其是好的内容必须会写(其他的大概意思符合原文即可)


  以下便是一篇范文吸收的全过程记录(选材与雅思OG——Test1大作文):

  题目 Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

  For most people, when they get their first job they have little idea whether or not they will remain in the same organization throughout their working life. If they decide to change, they need to consider how this will impact on their career overall.

  关于大多数人来说,当他们有了第一份作业的时分他们不知道他们是否会在同一个公司作业一辈。假如他们决议改动,他们需要考虑这对他们整个职业生涯的影响。

  (1) have little idea=have no idea

  (2) working for the same organization

  = remain in the same organization


  1. People who stay with the same organization have the advantage of thoroughly understanding how it works and becoming familiar with the staff and processes.

  呆在一个公司作业的人会有优势,完全了解公司的运作以及熟悉员工和作业流程。

  (1)working for the same organization

  = remain in the same organization

  = stay with the same organization


  2. If they work hard, their promotion prospects are good and there is likely to be greater job security, with the promise of a good pension when they retire.

  假如他们努力作业,他们的提升前景将会十分达观,很或许有更好的作业稳定性,当他们退休的时分有可观数量的退休金做保证。


  3. Employers value loyalty and may offer additional incentives to long-term employees, including bonuses and reward schemes.

  雇主十分重视忠诚,并对长期作业的员工提供额定的奖赏,比方奖金和奖赏机制。

  (1) stay with the same organization=loyalty

  1. However, one of the drawbacks of staying with the same organization is that the person may get stuck doing the same job year after year.

  然而,作业在同一个公司的缺点之一便是这个人或许会受困于年复一年地做着同样的作业。

  2. In some cases, this can lead to boredom and disillusionment.

  有些时分,这或许会导致无聊而且幻想破灭。

  3. Moving from one organization to another can be a strategic decision in order to have variety and acquire a range of skills and experience.

  假如你为了获得更多的或许性和更多的才能和阅历,那么从一个公司跳槽到另一个公司就会是一个策略性的决议。

  (1) a range of skills and experience

  (1) Moving from one organization to another

  =work for different organizations


  4. A friend of my father started out as a sociology teacher, he then joined the Social Services and is currently managing a care home in Western Australia.

  (不是特别重要的内容,就不必浪费时间翻译。)


  5. This has made him incredibly knowledgeable in a range of related fields and, in my view, has provided him with much more interesting working life.

  这使他在相关范畴变得十分博学,而且在我看来这也让他体验了风趣的作业生活。

  (1) a range of related fields

  Although there are benefits to working for one organization, I feel that it is also valuable for an employee to be able to offer a wide range of experience having worked for different companies. As long as it is planned carefully, I feel that change is good and will ultimately benefit the employee and the employer.

  (281 words)

  (1) ultimately benefit=finally benefit

  虽然在一个公司作业会有优点,可是我觉得员工假如有更多的在不同公司作业的阅历也是十分有价值的。只需有细心的方案,我以为改动便是很好的,而且最终会对雇主和雇员都有优点。

  考试之前每个类型的论题都积累一篇优质范文的话,再开端自己亲笔练习,作用会好许多!工欲善其事,必先利其器,关于写作来说最牛的利器便是好词好句。鸭鸭们依照正确的方向加油,方针分数和出国梦必定可以完成。


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