雅思写作模版方案剖析:单边结构


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一、前语

雅思关于判断作文的结构类型,应该不是很大的问题,现在咱们关心的是,考生过分依靠所谓的模板,而使得文章没有灵敏度,过分于形式化。同学们都知道,在考试中,如果咱们的文章过分形式化,也便是有背模板的嫌疑,这样的文章在考官眼中是低质量的作文。辛达雅思代报小编剖析以为,此现象的主要原因应该归咎于考生存在希望经过所谓“万能模板”去获得高分的心态,希望经过所谓捷径来快速获得抱负的分数。可是这样做往往会适得其反。

二、剖析

确定考试题型是大家考试之前必备一个能力,这是审题的一个重要前提。单边结构主要有两个方面的特征:考题文字中的观念单一和考生对观念支撑视点的单一,即不能不置可否,有必要有清晰的单一指向性的观念倾向。

真题链接:In some countries, government encourages industries and business to move from large cities to regional areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this policy?

以上是作文题库中的考试真题,相信大家都已经十分了解了。咱们就一同结合此题,对单边结构的全体文章结构和遣词造句做一个简略的对比。

1. 引言段

引言段是通篇作文的开篇之作,关于它的写法多种多样。可是无论怎样书写,切忌出现以下形式性的语句样式:

模板言语:

Nowadays, the relocation of industries and business has become a public focus on which people retain different views. Personally, I am favor of the opinion that we should move the industries and business to regional areas. The reasons can be listed in the following three aspects.

这样的模板相信大部分考生都不会觉得生疏,它从前“造福”了很多考生。可是这样过于机械的言语,很难体现出考生对考题文字的理解,更为糟糕的是,你的开头有可能和很多人是重复的!

下面咱们就做一个简略的对比:

非模板言语:

In traditional city planning, the industrial and commercial areas are placed in large cities.(调用背景知识,引出论题)However, recently, in some countries; government start to encourage those functional areas to move out of cities.(同义转化考题文字)The alternation of location for those sections can be viewed as an action to ensure the sustainable development of a country.(天然流露观念倾向)

2. 主体段

模板言语:

In the first place, ____________________________.

In the second place, _________________________.

Last but not the least, _________________________.

在传统的模板里,单边结构的主体段只是简略的分段证明分论点,虽然结构一目了然,可是也不免落入形式化的俗套。

做一个简略的对比:

非模板言语:

a. 退让剖析

Admittedly, when industry and commercial regions are established in large cities, the profits of enterprises could be maximized. Due to the sufficient human resource, advanced technology and complete infrastructure, urban areas are always regarded as a dream land for economic development. Apart from the positive effects the location exerts on the development of companies, the contribution of taxes to the government is another reason why those industries are originally built in cities.

单边结构并不总是一条道走到黑,能够先退让剖析题目中的背景信息,这样能够为观念的证明供给很好的衬托,当提出观念的时分就不会很突兀,会显得更加“底气十足”。

b. 转机过渡

However, nothing is without its costs. The flourishment of economy also brings a more crowded environment, soaring crime rate and the heavy burden of resources in cities, which arouses a dramatic conflict between different fields. What’s more, it leads to the unbalanced regional development. And the gap between cities and rural areas is continuously sharpened.

可是单边结构毕竟是要清晰地提出一个中心论点,才不会偏离文章的主旨,所以在这篇文章中,这个时分转机就显得适当重要。

c. 提出观念

Obviously, promoting the relocation of business and industries is a wise decision to ease the pressure of cities as well as facilitate the economic development in regional areas. The city will naturally be freed from the overcrowdedness and serious pollution. More importantly, those regional areas which are chosen as the new places for industries and commercial activities could gain an advantageous position in the rapid growth of local economy. People there may not pour into cities to pursue their goals, which could lead to the deterioration of both urban and rural environment.

有了前面的衬托,这时分的观念提出就十分顺畅了,不需要费尽口舌说服读者来“买你的帐”。笔者以为,只有衬托充足,观念的提出才更像是一种必然。

3. 结尾段

模板言语:

To sum up, from the above analysis, we can come to the conclusion that_____________________________________________.

做一个简略的对比:

非模板言语:

In conclusion, the change of location for both industry and business is based on extensive consideration, apparently, this policy could make the all-direction and sustainable development of a country a possibility. (天然流露观念倾向)

三、总结

建议各位考生:不要盲目追求所谓模板,要重视灵敏度。笔者以为,我国考生写作得分低,除了语法这个大问题以外,其实一味背诵模板乃至随处套用所谓“万能模板”是丢分的一大原因。写作的最高境地便是把各种衔接化于无形,实现语义的天然衔接。考生有必要依据考题的要求,调用自己原有的言语配上正确的语法,使作文具有鲜明的个人特征,侃侃而谈。在考场中,拉近与考官的距离而不是设置一道冷冰冰的“模板墙”。


小编找到的是作者的一些见解,希望可以为考生们寻找到最好得分方式,也希望对大家有所帮助。最后,希望广大考生们在备考过程中提升自己的语言水平,取得更好的成绩。

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