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触摸过雅思大作文的同学都应该知道,大作文首要调查”议论文”和“阐明文”两种类型。其中,议论文大概占80% 的比例,包括“观念类”和“论说类”两种类型。
无论是哪一种议论文,评分标准的前两项TA(任务完成度)和CC(衔接与连接)都强调证明的重要性,而怎么证明又恰巧是很多我国考生最头疼的当地。尤其是近年来,雅思大作文涉及的论题越来越抽象,越来越难考虑观念,以往一篇文章考生能想到三至四个观念,而现在能想到两到三个观念就已经绞尽脑汁了。
那么怎么在观念“缺货”的情况下,对文章的中心观念打开充沛证明呢?今日辛达雅思代报小编将给咱们介绍一种新的证明办法——退让的证明办法。
什么是退让段(“退一步海阔天空”)
说起“退让“二字,咱们应该不陌生,因为英语的语法知识体系里就有退让状语从句。在雅思大作文中,退让就是先退一步供认自己不同意的事实或者观念,再对其进行辩驳。
举个比如,咱们都或多或少有过面试的经历,咱们能够类比一下。一般在面试结束后,HR假如要回绝选用咱们,他会在回绝前先恰当肯定一下咱们在某些方面的闪光点,这就是退让。当然,肯定完之后,HR还是会直奔主题,给咱们挑刺,无情地回绝咱们。
在主体段写作过程中,将退让的内容扩展成一个阶段,就是咱们所说的退让段。
退让段的实战含义(“让你的证明无懈可击”)
退让段是一种实用性很强的写作阶段,在证明过程中有着广泛的实战含义。首要,退让段一般出现在一边倒的“五段式”作文中。如上文所述,很多学生都将大部分精力集中在苦思冥想三个支撑性观念和细节上, 而结果是往往想出第二个观念就语竭词穷了,但若换个思路,把最终一个主体段(全文第四段)写成退让段,能协助咱们很好地扩大文章的字数,满意写作要求。此外, 退让段写作还能够照顾到反方观念,避免给读者留下偏执走极端的印象,使证明愈加全面客观,使整篇文章的论说更具有说服力。
退让段究竟怎么写(“欲抑先扬、人格分裂”)
根据以上论说,咱们知道了退让段的概念和含义。下面咱们就来介绍退让段怎么写作。典型的写作方法是”三步走”准则: 立反(供认反方观念的合理性)+论反(给出反方论据)+驳反(辩驳反方观念)。
下文结合实例,咱们来剖析怎么写出一个具有说服力的退让段。
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“三步走”准则:退让=?立反+论反+驳反
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常用词汇句式
?立反
1. As is granted, ...
2. Opponents would argue that...
3. Although/ In spite of the fact that ..., people tend to believe that ...
4. It is undeniable that ...
论反
For example/ instance,...
This is because ...
驳反
However,...
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案例剖析
Example 1:
Some people think that it is more important to plant more trees in open areas such as towns and cities than build more housing. To what extent do agree or disagree?
退让段: (全文的立场: 种树比建房好)
?立反:In spite of the importance of planting trees in towns and cities, the construction of houses might be more significant in some cases.
论反:This is because in certain regions where housing shortage is rather severe, the priority of governments would be building houses rather than planting trees.
驳反:However, this kind of shortage has already been alleviated in numerous areas, so planting trees deserves more consideration.
经过上面这道题退让段的写作,咱们不难看出,“立反”和“论反”这两句的写作其实比较好找到突破口,关键是“驳反”这一句比较难寻切入点,这也被很多同学常常抱怨: 前一步刚给出理由来支撑一个观念,后一步就要推倒这个观念,难道是要我“人格分裂”吗?没错,是的!为了处理这个疑惑,以下就为咱们介绍两种“人格分裂”即“驳反”的办法。
“驳反”法一:处理问题--阐明问题能被克服,最好简略提出处理办法
Example 2:
In many countries, traditional foods are replacedby international fast foods. This is having a negative effect on families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
退让段:(全文的立场:快餐食物对人们有利)
?立反:In spite of the two advantages mentioned above, there is an evident disadvantage of fast food.
论反: The individuals who consume fast food constantly tend to become overweight, getting a number of diseases.
驳反: However, this risk could be avoided to a large extent if people have fast food properly and do exercise regularly. (处理问题)
“驳反”法二:互不相让--直接指出反方的缺点
Example 3:
Some people believe that living in big cities is bad for health.
Do you agree or disagree?
退让段:(全文的立场:住在城市对健康有害)
立反: Although living in urban areas is detrimental to individuals’ physical and mental health, there are also benefits of urban life.
论反: For instance, people might benefit from the better health care service provided in metropolises.
驳反: However, this service may never completely cope with the health problems of citizens living in big cities. (互不相让)
以上就是关于退让段的概念、含义的介绍,以及“三步走”准则的写法剖析。退让段关于增强证明的说服力和扩大文章内容,有着重要含义。推荐同学们在证明中正确使用此法,同时也期望该办法能切实协助咱们提高雅思写作水平,完成高能高分。
小编找到的是作者的一些见解,希望可以为考生们寻找到最好得分方式,也希望对大家有所帮助。最后,希望广大考生们在备考过程中提升自己的语言水平,取得更好的成绩。
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