浅析“下定义”在雅思议论文中的用途


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雅思写作一直是困扰考生的一个难点和瓶颈,不论是A类或是G类的同学,想要在写作中获得7分以上的高分是十分困难的事情。就考试本身而言,Task 2的得分起着要害的作用。在接下来的文章里,笔者并不是要探讨大作文的全盘攻略,而是围绕一种特别的写作思路和切入点来诠释它在谈论文中的运用,以期帮助咱们提高大作文的得分。以下便跟随辛达雅思代报小编一同来看一下:


“下定义”,能够给读者一个直观的概念或许明晰的思路,而且有利于后文的发展,而它本身并非只是字典上的解说,能够灵敏使用。接下来,教师将介绍一些它在大作文不同阶段里的使用:

(一) 导言段中的使用

1. Globalization

Globalization―the international spread of products, ideas and information―is bringing the world closer together. But globalization is not a new concept. For thousands of years,nations have roamed the earth in search of new markets and new sources of raw materials for their own industries.

关于“全球化”这个名词,考生并不生疏,但是怎样用合理的言语来赋予它一个含义,这并非易事,上述的导言段就很好地做到了这一点,先是从字面上诠释了“全球化”的界说,从而又从实际生活角度赋予了它另外一层含义。


2. Telephone/Mobile phone

Imagine using smoking signals,carrier pigeons or riders on horseback to send an important message. Although those methods may sound strange,years ago people used them to communicate.Today,all a person has to do is pick up a telephone/mobile phone.

关于电话这一现代通讯工具,地球人都知道它是干嘛的,不过呢,咱们能够从关于电话功能的界说上做文章,同样也能够赋予它一个生动的含义,而且一会儿能够吸引读者眼球。


3. Studying abroad

Every year,students around the world leave behind the comforts of home to pursue a study-abroad experience in a foreign country. While many would say that studying abroad is advantageous,some would argue otherwise.

出国留学同样是一个十分了解的论题,若直接用字典上的界说直接去解说它明显多此一举,因而,咱们不妨从旁边面打破,经过引进很多学生出国留学的事实和意图来诠释这个再也不能了解的论题,同样能够起到很不错的作用。


4. Success

As Thomas Edison once said,“If you wish to succeed,you should use persistence as your good friend,experience as your reference,prudence as your brother and hope as your sentry. ”This essay is going to look at factors that constitute success.

“假如你希望成功,当以恒心为良友、以经历为参谋、以慎重为兄弟、以希望为哨兵。”这是巨大的美国发明家爱迪生从前说过的一句话,凭借名人名言来下界说又是一种十分有用的最初方法,这样做一方面揭示了文章接下来的主题,另一方面也增强了说服力,可谓是一举两得。


(二) 主体段中的使用

1. Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake,regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What,in your opinion,should be the main function of a university? Test 4

以下是此标题一篇范文的第2个主体段:

However, reaching the conclusion that other functions,such as giving access to knowledge for its own sake,are no longer important is biased. For hundreds of years,especially in the west,the undergraduate education is,indeed, a liberal education,which means the undergraduates learn a wide range of curriculums such as psychology, economics, politics that has no direct relations to jobs. The upsides of this is that it firstly enables students to become broad-minded and help them lay a solid theoretical foundation,then they will be able to choose the most appropriate field based on their own interests for further studies.

这个阶段的论说的中心是大学以教授知识本身为意图,作者使用了“通才教育”这个在西方国家十分盛行的教育方法为佐证,在给出“通才教育”界说的本身,又用定语从句补充到了和标题第2个论点间的关系,从而进行了有力的比照,深化了阶段中心。


2. Education

When people leave school,they wish they could breathe a sign of relief and leave learning behind. However,learning should last a lifetime. You exercise your body to stay strong,and you should exercise your mind to stay sharp. ……

在这个关于教育的论题中,作者在论说时用终身教育的好处来诠释教育的长期性和必要性,从而为下文的扩展作了很好的衬托和过渡。


3. School should teach children academic subjects which will be beneficial to their future careers. Therefore,other subjects such as music and sports are not important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?(08年5月22日A类考题)

Academic subjects,such as reading and writing,play a vital role in the education system. Apart from activating creativity and imagination,it helps students lay a solid foundation of knowledge. Some might say that academic subject is to a student as a rifle is to a soldier,without which he is unable to fulfill his mission……

在这个主体段中,作者在最初便举出了一些学术课程的具体内容,从而给读者一个概念,同时也展示了作者对题意图解读能力。接下来咱们再来看一个类似的用法:


4. Why have not alternative energies already replaced fossil fuels?

There are also problems with production stability. The amount of energy we need varies throughout the day,andconventional energy production,such as coal and oil,can be increased or decreased based on these variations.Alternatives like wind and solar power are limited because they can only produce electricity when it is sunny or the wind is blowing.

在这篇剖析型大作文里,作者经过对化石燃料和可代替燃料的比照,突出了前者的优点,也揭示了后者的缺乏。经过将一个名词范围中的具体比如举出,是下界说的另外一种诠释。


小编找到的是作者的一些见解,希望可以为考生们寻找到最好得分方式,也希望对大家有所帮助。最后,希望广大考生们在备考过程中提升自己的语言水平,取得更好的成绩。

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