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       (一)限制于自己或朋友的比方。此类比方往往缺少客观性和说服力，由于第一人称的限制导致所叙说工作不免“鸡毛蒜皮”。要明白，个人不代表全体。

　　例：I keep my dog to avoid my loneliness and I find a lot of fun.

　　这样的比方让人犹如在看记叙文，和议论文很不搭调。

　　(二)引证过多数据。太多专业数据会给人捏造的痕迹，缺少真实性。考官会质疑数据的出处。

　　例：A survey indicates that the number of people smoking has increased to as high as 65 percent in China.(一项查询显示。。。)

　　"65%"让文章看起来有些假，有捏造的嫌疑。"A survey"又不够具有代表性。

　　(三)中国式的比方。一个国家相同难代表世界。雅思是international的考试，不应将范围框的太限制。此外考官来自各个国家，过火使用一个国家的比方会引起他们的反感。

　　例：Many children in China like to play computer games for a long time, leading to their poor eyesight.

　　只需小小改动便可成为成功典范。

　　因此，首先考生应了解，举例是一种常见的论说办法，特别在论说某一些比较抽象的论题的时候(比方文化类或跟艺术相关的论题)。但是，并不是每个阶段都需求例证法，举例过多或过火勉强会影响文章的正式感，乃至给考官喋喋不休的感觉。

　　举例是为了更加形象地叙说工作。提醒考生们要留意以下原则：

　　(一) 要来源于生活，要具有生动的论说作用。不能过于空洞，也不能脱离现时，否则就失去了举例的含义。

　　(二) 要客观表达。尽管来源于身边社会，但不可让描述办法变的太鸡毛蒜皮，拿不上台面。其实这点十分容易办到，只需求把工作中某一个具体的你，我，他，变成是客观群体，比方说people across the globe, students, they之类的人称即可。

　　举例的常见表达办法：

　　for example,/for instance,(后加语句)

　　Such as/ like (后加词组)

　　Take... as an example,

　　A case in point is that......

       其次，在举例时还应留意标准。

　　1. 应防止使用第一人称和第二人称，为了加强客观性，应将人称写成第三人称。

　　改正：Those people who raise pets, such as dogs and cats, are more likely to gain happiness and relieve their loneliness.(那些养宠物，例如养猫和养狗的人往往更容易获得高兴而且缓解孤独感)

　　2. 应防止引证一项查询研究，并同时伴有过多数据。应将数据去掉，用迷糊的办法标明。

　　改正：There is much evidence to show that the number of people smoking has increased at an alarming rate in China. (大量证据标明。。。)

　　3. 应防止将比方限制在一个国家，尤其是中国。应将范围放至全世界。

　　改正：Many children around the world like to sit in front of the screen for a long time, leading to their poor eyesight.(在全世界，许多孩子在屏幕前待太久，导致了他们的视力减弱。

　　“全世界”的表达办法：around the world, all over the world, across the globe

　　【写作真题】

　　The advocates of international aid believe that countries have a moral obligation to help each other, while the opponents consider it necessary, because money is misspent by the governments that receive it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

　　【名师献计】

　　This aid is essential to the homeless and useful in helping recipient countries return to their normal state after major disturbances. For example, with the humanitarian relief obtained worldwide on an annual basis, victims of natural disasters (such as tsunami, drought, flood) throughout the world can recover rapidly and rebuild their homeland.