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       When we learn a language, we should also learn the cultures and lifestyles of this country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　There is no doubt that when you begin to learn a language, both cultures and lifestyles are indispensable for learning. Only learning cultrues and lifestyles can you have a good commond of what you learn.

　　结构剖析： 1+1’的模式，最终一句是主题句。问题仍是有的，比如榜首句是介绍标题布景，但好像写得和标题仍是太像了，最好是可以变换的程度再大些。而最终一句表达观念的主题句却有显着的语法过错和拼写过错。所以起评分也只能在5-6 分之间了。值得一提的是，作者首段给人的感觉文章比较简练，不像有的文章为了凑字数，废话很多。

　　First of all, cultures paly a big role in languages. Colloquial phrases are pleasant to the ear, not only because they are familiar, but also because they reflect a unique aspect of a culture which is a symbol of countries or living areas. So necessary do you learn cultures first when you determine to learn a new language.

　　结构剖析：作者仍是一向地秉承简练的写作风格，给人感觉结构十分清晰，作者的写作目的和内容也十分容易把握。需求指出的是，作者很显着在榜首段和这段的最终一句话都妄图想用倒装句来添加言语的多样性，可惜的是都错了!!!看来倒装句没有学好，呵呵。。。

　　In addition, some special languages in Canada and Austrilia have words that reflect a way of life that is connected close to the Earth. There are fifty different words that mean `snow` in one Canadian native language. Various local languages have been evolved through human`s lifes and have been continuing to change step by step. If we expect to learn the most aboriginal languages, lifestyles count for learning.

　　结构剖析：此段好像没有太显着的句型过错，可是词汇过错却多了(如赤色部分)。内容仍是一向地很容易把握。

　　When you make a decision to learn languages, a good advice recommended to you is that living with the local people whose mother language is what you will learn, can communicate with you frequently. In this way can you learn languages quickly ,efficiently and authoritatively.

　　结构剖析：值得表彰的是此段最终一句倒装句总算用对了。可是，赤色部分，即榜首句因为妄图运用复杂句，导致呈现了很严重的理解问题，这是一大败笔!

　　To sum up, learning languages is not a simple task but a process of knowing different cultures and customs. So, to get involved in the cultures and lifestyles can make your learning happily .I am sure that you will enjoy every minute of learning languages. ( 251words )

　　结构剖析：最终一段有一个小过错，其他都还好，归于中规中矩的写法。

　　总评：整篇文章风格比较显着，就是简练(和我以前发布的文章不太相同)和喜爱运用倒装句和定语从句。看得出来，作者是故意在夸耀自己已经把握的句型。

　　缺陷么也很显着，对某些词汇的用法把握地很欠好，对某些句型的精确度也有待进步。