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       【怎么进步雅思写作成果一：避免运用语意弱的“be”动词】

　　1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。

　　这个技巧并不是那么简略掌握，但是确实是一个能够进步雅思写组成果的十分有用的技巧。

　　Weak：The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.

　　Revision：The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)

　　2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。

　　1) Weak：The team members are good players.

　　Revision：The team members play well.

　　2) Weak：One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.

　　Revision：One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.

　　3、在以“here”或“there”最初的语句中，把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。

　　1)Weak：There is no opportunity for promotion.

　　Revision：No opportunity for promotion exists.

　　2)Weak：Here are the books you ordered.

　　Revision：The books you ordered have arrived.

　　【怎么进步雅思写作成果二：多用语意详细的动词，坚持句意简洁明了】

　　这样的详细描绘能够让文章看起来更具说服力，当然也就能够进步雅思写作成果了。

　　1、Poor：My supervisor went past my desk.

　　Better：My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.

　　2、Poor：She is a careful shopper.

　　Better：She compares prices and quality.

　　【怎么进步雅思写作成果三：尽量运用自动语态】

　　之所以要这样做，是因为很多人不明白什么时候该用自动，什么时候该用被迫。用错了，当然也就谈不上进步雅思写作成果了。

　　1、Weak：The organization has been supported by charity.

　　Better：Charity has supported the organization.

　　2、Weak：The biscuits were stacked on a plate.

　　Better：Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.

　　【怎么进步雅思写作成果四：避免运用语意冗长负担的词语】

　　想要进步雅思写作成果就得使写作的用词简略，生动。

　　1、Wordy：My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.

　　Improved：My little sister prefers chocolate milk.

　　2、Wordy：We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.

　　Improved：We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.

　　3、Redundant：We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

　　Improved：We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

　　4、Redundant：My sister and I bought the same， identical dress in different stores.

　　Improved：My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.

　　【怎么进步雅思写作成果五：根绝乱用陈腐词语或难明的专业术语】

　　这是言语考试，不是专业考试，进步雅思写作成果的要害点在言语上，是文章的表现力上!

　　1、Weak：They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.

　　Improved：They will not agree to any of his proposals.

　　2、Weak：I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.

　　Improved：I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.

　　因而，文章的表现力关于雅思写作的出彩与否密切相关，期望对广大的烤鸭们有所启示，祝我们考试顺畅，争夺拿高分。