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  单边构造是雅思作文中的多见题型之一，在剖析题型的基础上，怎么使用雅思写作模板，淡化雅思写作模板痕迹，是咱们需求思考的疑问。这篇文章就经过剖析雅思写作中单边构造题型比照多见的论题，评论怎么淡化雅思写作模板痕迹。

  一、前语

  关于判断作文的构造类型，应当不是很大的疑问，如今咱们关心的是，考生过分依靠所谓的模板，而使得文章没有灵敏度，过分于形式化。同学们都知道，在考试中，如果咱们的文章过分形式化，也即是有背模板的嫌疑，这么的文章在考官眼里是低质量的作文。朗阁海外考试研究中心剖析以为，此景象的主要因素应当归咎于考生存在希望经过所谓“全能模板”去获得高分的心态，希望经过所谓捷径来疾速获得抱负的分数。可是这么做往往会拔苗助长。

  二、剖析

  断定考试题型是咱们考试之前必备一个能力，这是审题的一个主要条件。单边构造主要有两个方面的特征：考题文字中的观念单一和考生对观念支撑视点的单一，即不能不置可否，必须有清晰的单一指向性的观念倾向。

  真题联接：In some countries, government encourages industries and business to move from large cities to regional areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this policy?

  以上是作文题库中的考试真题，信任咱们都已经十分了解了。咱们就和雅思代报一同联系此题，对单边构造的全体文章构造和遣词造句做一个简略的比照。

  1. 导言段

  导言段是通篇作文的开篇之作，关于它的写法多种多样。可是无论怎样书写，切忌呈现以下形式性的句子款式：

  模板言语：

  Nowadays, the relocation of industries and business has become a public focus on which people retain different views. Personally, I am favor of the opinion that we should move the industries and business to regional areas. The reasons can be listed in the following three aspects.

  这么的模板信任大多数考生都不会觉得生疏，它从前“谋福”了无数考生。可是这么过于机械的言语，很难体现出考生对考题文字的理解，更为差劲的是，你的最初有也许和无数人是重复的！

  下面咱们就做一个简略的比照：

  非模板言语：

  In traditional city planning, the industrial and commercial areas are placed in large cities.（调用布景常识，引出论题）However, recently, in some countries; government start to encourage those functional areas to move out of cities.（同义变换考题文字）The alternation of location for those sections can be viewed as an action to ensure the sustainable development of a country.（天然流露观念倾向）

  2. 主体段

  模板言语：

In the first place, ____________________________.

In the second place, _________________________.

Last but not the least, _________________________.

在传统的模板里，单边构造的主体段仅仅简略的分段证明分观念，尽管构造一目了然，可是也不免落入形式化的俗套。

做一个简略的比照：

  非模板言语：

  a. 退让剖析

  Admittedly, when industry and commercial regions are established in large cities, the profits of enterprises could be maximized. Due to the sufficient human resource, advanced technology and complete infrastructure, urban areas are always regarded as a dream land for economic development. Apart from the positive effects the location exerts on the development of companies, the contribution of taxes to the government is another reason why those industries are originally built in cities.

  单边构造并不总是一条道走到黑，能够先退让剖析题目中的布景信息，这么能够为观念的证明供给很好的衬托，当提出观念的时分就不会很突兀，会显得愈加“底气十足”。

  b. 转机过渡

  However, nothing is without its costs. The flourishment of economy also brings a more crowded environment, soaring crime rate and the heavy burden of resources in cities, which arouses a dramatic conflict between different fields. What’s more, it leads to the unbalanced regional development. And the gap between cities and rural areas is continuously sharpened.

  可是单边构造毕竟是要清晰地提出一个中心观念，才不会偏离文章的宗旨，所以在这篇文章中，这个时分转机就显得相当主要。

  c. 提出观念

  Obviously, promoting the relocation of business and industries is a wise decision to ease the pressure of cities as well as facilitate the economic development in regional areas. The city will naturally be freed from the overcrowdedness and serious pollution. More importantly, those regional areas which are chosen as the new places for industries and commercial activities could gain an advantageous position in the rapid growth of local economy. People there may not pour into cities to pursue their goals, which could lead to the deterioration of both urban and rural environment.

  有了前面的衬托，这时分的观念提出就十分顺利了，不需求费尽唇舌压服读者来“买你的帐”。笔者以为，只要衬托足够，观念的提出才更像是一种必定。

  3. 结尾段

  模板言语：

  To sum up, from the above analysis, we can come to the conclusion that_____________________________________________.

 做一个简略的比照：

 非模板言语：

  In conclusion, the change of location for both industry and business is based on extensive consideration, apparently, this policy could make the all-direction and sustainable development of a country a possibility. （天然流露观念倾向）

 三、总结

  建议各位考生：不要盲目寻求所谓模板，要重视灵敏度。笔者以为，中国考生写作得分低，除了语法这个大疑问以外，其实一味背诵模板乃至到处套用所谓“全能模板”是丢分的一大因素。写作的最高境地即是把各种联接化于无形，完成语义的天然联接。考生必须依据考题的请求，调用自个原有的言语配上准确的语法，使作文具有鲜明的自己特征，侃侃而谈。在考场中，拉近与考官的间隔而不是设置一道冷冰冰的“模板墙”。

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