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  一、 用词

“bicycle”作者的用词是我国式的。从标题就能够看出来。骑自行车的通常说法是 “cycling” 或“riding a bike”,骑自行车的人是“bicyclist”或“cyclist”。假如依据作者的标题，不应当是评论骑自行车的疑问，应当是评论自行车自身比如发 明、改善、用处、报价、款式、功用等疑问。文中别的的用词，我们能够自个找。

  二、 句式

“bicycle”的作者句式单一，简直即是一个又一个简略句次序排列，并且少有用形容词和副词润饰语句，使语句过于平平。重点不杰出，句式无崎岖，词汇 有限，并在文章中重复使用，如：“骑自行车”，作者仅用“bicycles”或“riding bikes”或“they”造简略句。而“why cycle?”的作者用相同的词对语句做各种润饰。尽管文体是essay, 但由于是登在网上的，要照料各个层次的读者，所以作者的句式和用词都趋于简略，但并不单调。

  三、 文章构造

“bicycle”作者的思路是清晰的，但表达不明确，所以形成构造紊乱的感受，考试时会吃亏的。

下面即是雅思代报例举这两篇文章。

  我国作者的Bicycle
 

Bicycles have become more and more popular in China. People ride bikes to their work places, to shopping areas, to schools, and so on. During the rush hours, you can often see a boiling sea of bicycles running in all directions. With the largest number of bike riders in the world, China is often referred to as the kingdom of bicycles.(主题句不明显，不知道作者想要说什么：自行车越来越盛行，要评论盛行趋势?自行车那么多，要评论自行车对城市的影响?我国是自行车王 国，要评论我国的自行车前史? )

Compared with cars, bikes have many advantages(这应当是主题句，在这么短的文章里应当放在榜首段). First, they are not very expensive, and almost every family can afford them. (这句话分红2个语句比较好，一句是key point,一句做进一步解说)Second, they are very handy and convenient though they are not so fast as cars. With a bike, you can go anywhere you like, and you don't have to look for a large parking place. By riding bikes, you can avoid traffic jams and thus save the time and the money for taking taxis(同榜首点相同，但这一点思路有些乱). Third, they do not cause air or sound pollution(没有解说，这一点肯定拿不到好分数). 

Riding bikes does good to your health if you ride it regularly(这应当是文章要论说的第四点，但没有连接词，又分了段，打乱了文章的全体构造). In modern times, people are usually too busy to spare any time for physical exercise. Riding a bike to your work place regularly serves as a good way to keep yourself strong and healthy. (2个语句的次序换一下比较好。由于前面现已说了有益于健康，读者等着听解说，但作者却换了论题。榜首句话应当是第二句话的因素。)Therefore, a bicycle is really an important means of transportation in China. It has been very useful, convenient and necessary ever since it was invented. And I do believe it will still be so in the future.(定论情绪不明显，没有紧扣主题句。 应当重述四个优点，然后给出定论)

  英国人写的 Why cycle?

作者： Alix Stredwick， 摘自London Cycling Campaign 的网站。

There are many good reasons to cycle. (榜首句话即是主题句，西方人的习气)Cycling is the most efficient means of getting around London.(优点之一) Many journeys we make are shorter than two miles or less and these are usually faster on a cycle than travelling by car, bus, tube, train or taxi.(进一步解说，加强说服力)。Not only is cycling good for you, it is also fun and available to all(优点之二). It is a chance to get out of the house or workplace, to be active and to be sociable(解说). Getting a bike needn't be expensive and upkeep is low cost and easy. (优点之三，这三个优点仅仅泛泛阐明，通常是前面的观点比后边的更主要，所以语句一个比一个短))

Save money(开始论说榜首点)

Using a bike to replace your regular form of transport is a great way to save money(主句，契合观点). It's well documented that cycling is the best value way to travel around London(引用计算结果，有肯定说服力) . Compared to cars, bicycles are much cheaper to buy and maintain, and you don't have all the added costs of fuel, Vehicle Excise Duty and parking(比较法，举例阐明怎样省钱).

Save time(观点二)

For a typical London journey, cycling is faster than the car, public transport, taxis or walking(主句，契合观点). Remember that cycling is a door to door service. On a bicycle you can easily cover five miles in half an hour and be confident that you'll arrive on time(解说如何省时间). Car or bus journeys take longer and depend on traffic, or irregular bus services(搭汽车时间长，从不和解说骑自行车省时间). For longer trips, you can combine bike and public transport: leaving your bike at the station or sometimes taking it on the train/tube at off-peak times. See the LCC information booklet "Transporting Your Bicycle" for further information.(进一步解说，帮你处理你有也许遇到的疑问，打消你欲辩论的想法)

Become healthier(观点三)

Cycling is an excellent way to get fit and live longer(主句，契合观点). By riding a bike you'll be incorporating exercise into your daily life. Remember that to stay healthy you need 30 minutes of exercise per day: that 15 minute cycle to work is the perfect prescription for losing weight and getting fit(解说。口气不是说教，而像是你的保健顾问，说服力强).

By cycling you cut down your risk of heart attacks, high blood pressure and other illnesses. The benefits, says the British Medical Association, far outweigh any risks associated with cycling.(论据二)

By getting fitter and escaping the frustrations of traffic jams and tube and train delays you will also reduce your stress levels and enjoy your day more. (论据三)

It has been shown that by cycling you will breathe fewer fumes than those in cars or buses, so are less likely to suffer from respiratory diseases(论据四).

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