雅思写作中的个性化表达方法辅导


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       在许多考生的概念中,议论文是争辩式的文章,需求摆事实、讲道理。他们以为,用“说理”性的文字来证明自己的观念才是最具有说服力的,相对而言,用太多的个人经历、心情、喜爱等“特性化”内容作为论据则会由于缺少“普遍适用性”不行让人服气。这样的主意也不无道理,的确,有些学生的文章呈现了过多的以“I”引出的个人经历式论据,过多的谈论自己经历的某些事情,使文章偏离了争辩的初衷,反倒有点像记叙文,这就是教师需求题型学生要留意防止的问题了。

  但是恰当地在文章中交叉一些与个人经历或个人喜爱有关的一些描绘,会使文章变得更富特性化颜色,言语显得更为活泼生动,在千人一面的说理式文章中显得更为出众,给考官留下好的形象。此外,特性经历式的描绘从言语说上比较详细,考生在言语安排方面也会轻松许多。那么怎样进行特性化思路的表达呢?本文将从议论文的导言段、主体段和结束段动身,剖析一些具有特性化思路的范文,并总结一些议论文特性化表达的计划。

  一、导言段部分的特性化表达:

  一个好的导言段对议论文的作用显而易见,比较常规的写法是在导言段的开端对议论文的论题作布景陈说,通常是大致介绍考题中所触及的事物或行为在当今社会的整体状况或特征。这种写作方法中规中矩,但很难表现出特性化颜色。导致许多文章总是在用“Nowadays…”、“With the development of…”等千人一面的套句。而特性化的表达能够使文章的布景介绍与自己的亲身经历相结合,使文章变得更为鲜活,开头段便显得异乎寻常,引起考官的留意。下面来看一个比方:

  People in the modern world are enjoying greater wealth but they are not as fit and active as they were in the past. What are the reasons? Suggest some measures to solve this problem.

  I keep on nodding in agreement when seeing the background information of the question. I myself have always been struggling not to be overweight. Unfortunately, like most others, I failed. As to why people nowadays are not as fit and active as they were, various factors can be identified.

  二,主体段(理由段)中的特性化表达:

  主体段(理由段)是比较难以进行特性化表达的部分,或者说在理由段进行特性化表达要特别留意“尺度”,由于假如理由段中的特性化表达过多,则会造成前文所提到的降低文章论据“普遍实用性”和说服力的成果。那么怎样达到特性化和说服力的平衡性呢?咱们能够先看两段文字

  Some people warn that the era of the silver screen is coming to an end and that people will eventually lose interest in going to the cinema. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

  特性化理由段-评论interest in going to the cinema

  However, the cinemas in my home country are still full every weekend and when a new film is released we are all keen to go and watch it. In fact, many small cinemas have been rebuilt and we can now go to large centres that have six or eight cinema screens and show up to ten different films a night. An evening out at the cinema is fun and some films, particularly horror and science fiction films, are much better on the big screen.

  There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

特性化理由段-评论international music重要性

  However, there is one reason why international music may be more important, and that is since it is widely liked internationally, it helps unite the world. I noticed this in Korea, when I saw young Korean boys dancing in unison to modern rock music. The traditional Korean music is often too difficult, high toned and not relevant to the lives of younger people.

  在榜首段话中,作者结合自己国家的电影商场状况说,阐明人们仍是有爱好去电影院看电影的;在第二段话中,作者结合自己去韩国旅行的所见所闻证明了国际音乐的重要性。能够看出,这两个主体段的理由陈说都是和个人经历相结合的,所以文章显得很有特性化,但却彻底不失争辩力度。这样的理由段写作方法也是值得教学中让学生领会和测验的。

  三,结束段中的特性化表达:

  在议论文写作中,结束段通常是观念的重申。许多学生由于表达方法的缺少,会觉得重述观念是一件比较困难的事,因而文章匆忙结束。而恰当参加特性化的思路表达,能够使文章的结束变得愈加生动。比方下面这段结束:

  结束段着重保持健康的重要性:

  I believe that all of us can imagine the daring consequences of living a life without a sound body. Therefore I decide to walk home instead of taking a taxi.

  总而言之,特性化的表达能够呈现在文章的导言段、主体段和结束段,这些特性化的文字与传统说理争辩式言语相同,都能够达到明晰地提出或证明观念的意图。奇妙地运用这些特性化的言语和思路,能够使文章的争辩变得“和蔼可亲”且独具匠心。




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