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       众所周知，雅思写作往往是广阔雅思考生感到最头疼的一个部分，也是得分最低的一项。以2008年为例，依据雅思官方的材料，08年我国大陆雅思考生均匀成果5.46分，其间写作最低，仅5.12分。

　　形成这一现象的原因是多方面的，其间一个很重要的原因在于，许多学生仅仅重视考试技巧，对所谓“模板”趋之若鹜，而不是去着手进步言语才干。实际上，考试技巧当然重要，可是要想真实在写作考试中获得理想成果，还得从根本上去进步言语才干，由于从根本上来说，雅思写作考试调查的是考生能否用契合逻辑的言语去表达观念的才干。假如没有打下杰出的言语根底，那么所谓的考试技巧都将成为海市蜃楼，徒有空架子而没有内容。关于许多考生而言，文章章法(即文章的行文思路、布局谋篇、结构组织、逻辑顺序)和想观念或许不是最难的，难的是用详细的言语去表达观念。

　　那么该怎样去进步言语表达才干呢?研习、背诵和仿照范文(包含其他优异英文文章)是个有用的途径。这是由于：写作是个言语输出的进程，而要想确保输出的质量，就一定要确保有许多、高质量的输入。研习和背诵范文就是这样的一个输入和堆集的进程。当然，首先要搞清楚研习范文的意义。所谓研习范文，绝非仅仅是把他人的文章看懂，而是要本着独立思考的精神，依据自己的实际情况，研讨并汲取范文中精华的部分。换句话说，就是要把范文中的美丽词汇和句型(但不限于词汇和句型)经过背诵和重复记忆内化成自己的东西，以便在往后写作中的用到。所以，这个进程表现要表现出研习范文之后对往后写作的影响。只要这样做，才干从根本上防止许多同学把输入范文和输出写作分裂开来的误区，然后做到“范文好，我的作文也好”，并终究完成“大家好，才是真的好”的喜人局面。

　　接下来，以研习剑六G类的B篇考官范文为例，阐明这个问题。

　　范文：剑六， P172

　　Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children。

　　Do you agree or disagree?

　　I tend to agree that young children can be negatively affected by too much time spent on the computer every day. This is partly because sitting in front of a screen for too long can be damaging to both the eyes and the physical posture of young child, regardless of what they are using the computer for。

　　However, the main concern is about the type of computer activities that attract children. These are often electronic games that tend to be very intense and rather violent. The player is usually the “hero” of the game and too much exposure can encourage children to be self-centered and insensitive to others。

　　Even when children use a computer of other purposes, such as getting information or emailing friends, it is no substitute for human interaction. Spending time with other children and sharing non-virtual experiences is an important part of a children’s development that cannot be provided by a computer。

　　In spite of this, the obvious benefits of computer skills for young children cannot be denied. Their adult world will be changing constantly in terms of technology and the Internet is the key to all the knowledge and information available in the world today. Therefore it is important that children learn at an early age to use the equipment enthusiastically and with confidence as they will need these skills throughout their studies and working lives。

　　I think the main point is to make sure the young children do not overuse computers. Parents must ensure that their children learn to enjoy other kinds of activity and not simply sit at home, learning to live in a virtual world。

研习进程：范文原句→启示→对写作的影响(仿照句)

　　1. 观念不肯定

　　a。范文原句：

　　I tend to agree that young children can be negatively affected by too much time spent on the computer every day。

　　b。启示：这句话顶用到了tend to agree 这个短语，表明“倾向于同意”，表现出不肯定的语气。

　　c。对写作的影响(仿照范句)：

　　I am inclined to think that…; I tend to believe that…

　　2。遣词谨慎

　　a范文原句： This is partly because sitting in front of a screen for too long can be damaging to both the eyes and the physical posture of young child, regardless of what they are using the computer for。

　　b。启示：副词partly，形似简略，可是实际上大多数考生没有用过。这个副词虽小，可是表达的意思是：这儿列举的原因仅仅一部分，表现出了写作的谨慎。

　　c。对写作的影响(仿照范句)：

　　中文例句：由于道路系统欠好，所以大城市堵车。

　　未仿照前：The traffic congestion is because of the poor road system。

　　仿照后：The traffic congestion is partly because of the poor road system。

　　相似表达：be largely due to

　　3。对笼统名词的解说、举例，细化笼统名词：

　　a。范文原句： Even when children use a computer of other purposes, such as getting information or emailing friends…

　　b. purpose比较笼统，such as getting information or emailing friends归于对purpose内容的解说，经过对笼统名词的细化，一方面能够把凑点字数，把语句写得比较长，另一方面，使得语句更细节化。

　　c。对写作的影响(仿照范句)：

　　中文例句1：有些技术会有负面影响。

　　未仿照前：Some technologies are of negative impact. →

　　仿照后：Some technologies, such as weapons of mass destruction, are of negative impact。

　　相似细化笼统名词的表达：from…to…; whether…or…;

       中文例句2.：我在我国的那几年，有时机跟我国的翻译们紧密地合作。

　　未仿照前：During those years when I was in China, I had the opportunity to work closely with Chinese translators. →

　　仿照后：During those years when I was in China, I had the opportunity to work closely with Chinese translators, from beginners fresh out of school to those most capable senior professors。

　　例句3.：政府该重视教育。

　　未仿照前：Governments should attach great importance to education.→

　　未仿照后：Governments, whether rich or poor, should attach great importance to education。

　　4。堆集美丽词汇：(1)精彩词汇(2)主题词汇

　　(1)精彩词汇

　　a。范文原句： Too much exposure can encourage children to be self-centered and insensitive to others。

　　b:启示： exposure 用得十分地道，一般考生不会想到，同时这个词做主语，构成了无灵主语(非人称开头)。

　　c。对写作的影响(仿照范句)：

　　中文例句：小孩在网络上接触到太多不良信息对他们的生长欠好。

　　未仿照前：If children get access to too much undesirable information on the Internet, then it would undermine their personal growth. / Gaining too much undesirable information on the Internet would undermine their personal growth。

　　仿照后：Heavy exposure to undesirable information on the Internet would undermine the personal growth of children。

　　(2)主题词汇(电视电脑类论题)： self-centered, insensitive

　　5。堆集精彩句型：

　　a。范文原句： Their adult world will be changing constantly in terms of technology

　　b。此句写得很地道，句型精彩，并且合适仿照，in terms of 后可跟不同的词。

　　c。对写作的影响(仿照范句)：

　　中文例句：当今世界，科技进步日新月异。

　　仿照前：In contemporary society, science and technology are advancing rapidly→

　　仿照后：The world we are living in is changing constantly in terms of science technology。(in terms of globalization / urbanization / fashion…)

　　英语写作才干的进步是一个长时间的系统工程，上面所展示的对范文言语的研习和仿照仅仅其间一个片段。尽管如此，这种研习和仿照范文的思路和方法却是进步写作才干的根本途径之一。若雅思考生能多给写作留点备考时间，重视堆集，将上述方法其融入到自己的学习实践中，夯实言语根底，便能真实完成从输入到输出的提高，不只顺畅经过雅思考试，并且还使得英语写作成为一项随同一生的技术。