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语句构造是雅思写作评分标准“语法的多样性与准确度”中一项十分重要的考量因素,但这并不意味着请求考生具备写长难句的才能。在寻求输出像雅思阅读相同精到的言语之前,咱们首先要保证的应当是写出来的语句是准确的。雅思代报总结有用的语句甚而阶段一般应当一起满意以下五个要素:共同、连接、简练、着重、多样。
1. 共同:如句内的逻辑关系,留意查看是否存在简略推论、逻辑残损、逻辑悖论、依靠成见等。
Born in a small town in South Chinain the early 1950s, he grew up to be a famous musician.
→ He was born in a small town in South China in the early 1950s. In his childhood he liked to sing songs. Later he entered a conservatory. In the 1970s he became a famous musician.
2. 连接:这个问题在平行构造、共用主语、运用指代的情况下尤其需求留意。
We thought she was charming, intelligent, and a very capable young woman.
→ We thought she was charming, intelligent, and very capable.
Or: We thought she was a charming, intelligent, and very capable young woman.
He was knocked down by a bicycle, but it was not serious.
→ He was knocked down by a bicycle, but was not badly injured.
Looking out of the window, the grassland stretches as far as the eye can reach.
→ Looking out of the window, we can see the grassland stretching as far as the eye can reach.
Or: Outside the window, the grassland stretches as far as the eye can reach.
He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, which nobody believed.
→ He gave a reason, which nobody believed, for not attending the meeting.
Or: He gave a reason for not attending the meeting, a reason which nobody believed.
3. 简练:英美文明推重坦率和直接,一般不需求体现咱儒家文明的宛转和委婉。
It was small in size and blue in colour.
→ It was small and blue.
He usually likes to drink all kinds of wines that are produced in France.
→ He prefers French wines.
4. 着重:正如每篇文章都要有中心思想(main idea),每个阶段都要有主题句(topic sentence)一般,每个语句都要环绕一个中心观点清晰地呈现出作者想要体现的要点。
He is modest and hardworking and is a good student.
→ He is a good student, modest and hardworking.
There is a big tree, which is said to be 300 years old, in the temple.
→ In the temple there is a big tree, which is said to be 300 years old.
At the sight of the disorderly crowd, he was aware that something bad would be possible.
→ The moment he saw the disorderly crowd, he knew that something bad wouldhappen.
5. 多样:中文重重复,英文重代替,中英区别使然。
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