雅思写作范文:个人美好的原因


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       Some people think that personal happiness is directly related to economic success. Others argue that happiness depends on different factors. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

  Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?

  范文

  A job provides the worker with the necessary means to remain satisfied in almost every aspect of life such as leisure, health, and social life. Consequently, finding a satisfying and motivating job is essential for improving an individual’s overall quality of life, and several key factors are thought to be critical for an employee to achieve job satisfaction.

  A reasonable salary is of course the most likely contributor to job satisfaction. In many people’s minds, an ideal job is first of all a well-paid one, which makes the employee feel that he is fairly rewarded for what he has done for the company. Another important element of job satisfaction is the nature of the job itself. Job satisfaction can never be achieved if the work is boring, or if the work is ill-suited to the employee’s education, skills and interests. Finally, job satisfaction is closely associated with being part of the decision-making process in the company as well as having opportunities for promotion.

  However, it is very difficult for a company to ensure that all its employees are satisfied with their job. The main reason is that different people have different definitions of job satisfaction. Some people may care salary more than opportunities for promotion. Others may never tolerate a boring task. Also, in the wild chase for quicker and higher profits, ensuring workers’ job satisfaction has become only a secondary or even non-existent goal for many employers.

  In conclusion, increasing workers’ job satisfaction can be a challenge for an employer, but for an individual employee, finding the right job and trying to stay positive might be the first step towards achieving job fulfillment and satisfaction.

  要点词句解析

  motivate

  v.激起

  He is genuinely motivated by a desire to help people.

  consequently

  adv.然后, 因而

  I spent most of my money in the first week and consequently had very little to eat by the end of the holiday.

  critical

  adj. 重要的

  The President's support is critical (to this project).

    ideal

  adj.抱负的, 完美的, 幻想的, 观念的, 唯心论的

  The television also comes in a compact 36 cm screen size, ideal for bedroom or kitchen use.

  promotion

  n.促进, 提拔, 晋升

  The job offers excellent promotion prospects.

  secondary

  adj. 第二的;第二位的,附属的

  Many older people still believe that women's careers are secondary.

  fulfillment

  n. 滿足(感),成果(感)

  People find fulfillment in working for a common goal.

  several key factors are critical for…

  在“剖析处理”型的雅思议论文写作中,简直都会需求写到“有几条要素导致……的问题”这样的概念,范文中的这个句式值得读者学习:

  Consequently, finding a satisfying and motivating job is essential for improving an individual’s overall quality of life, and several key factors are thought to be critical for an employee to achieve job satisfaction.

  critical也可以用essential替代,例如:

  Three factors are essential for keeping your bones healthy throughout your life.




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