介绍雅思议论文写作的个性化表达法


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       一,导言段部分的个性化表达:

  一个好的导言段对议论文的效果显而易见,比较惯例的写法是在导言段的开端对议论文的论题作布景陈说,通常是大致介绍考题中所触及的事物或行为在当今社会的总体状况或特征。这种写作方式中规中矩,但很难表现出个性化颜色。导致许多文章总是在用“Nowadays…”、“With the development of…”等千篇一律的套句。而个性化的表达能够使文章的布景介绍与自己的亲身经历相结合,使文章变得更为鲜活,最初段便显得异乎寻常,引起考官的注意。下面来看一个比方: People in the modern world are enjoying greater wealth but they are not as fit and active as they were in the past. What are the reasons? Suggest some measures to solve this problem.

  个性化导言段

  I keep on nodding in agreement when seeing the background information of the question. I myself have always been struggling not to be overweight. Unfortunately, like most others, I failed. As to why people nowadays are not as fit and active as they were, various factors can be identified.

  二,主体段(理由段)中的个性化表达:

  主体段(理由段)是比较难以进行个性化表达的部分,或者说在理由段进行个性化表达要特别注意“尺度”,由于如果理由段中的个性化表达过多,则会造成前文所说到的下降文章论据“遍及实用性”和说服力的成果。那么怎么到达个性化和说服力的平衡性呢?我们能够先看几段文字:

  Tele-education has been playing an increasingly significant role in modern education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  个性化理由段-讨论telecommunication的长处

  In classrooms across most parts of the developed world you will see an array of telecommunications equipment from TVs to computers. This technology allows students greater contact with the outside……I remember attending a small rural primary school, but watching the landing of people on the moon.

  Some people warn that the era of the silver screen is coming to an end and that people will eventually lose interest in going to the cinema. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

  个性化理由段-讨论interest in going to the cinema

  However, the cinemas in my home country are still full every weekend and when a new film is released we are all keen to go and watch it. In fact, many small cinemas have been rebuilt and we can now go to large centres that have six or eight cinema screens and show up to ten different films a night. An evening out at the cinema is fun and some films, particularly horror and science fiction films, are much better on the big screen.

  There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

       个性化理由段-讨论international music重要性

  However, there is one reason why international music may be more important, and that is since it is widely liked internationally, it helps unite the world. I noticed this in Korea, when I saw young Korean boys dancing in unison to modern rock music. The traditional Korean music is often too difficult, high toned and not relevant to the lives of younger people.

  在榜首段话种,作者结合自己幼年在校园看登月直播的经历说明“tele-education”的好处。在第二段话中,作者结合自己国家的电影商场状况说,说明人们还是有爱好去电影院看电影的;在第三段话中,作者结合自己去韩国旅游的所见所闻证明了世界音乐的重要性。能够看出,这两个主体段的理由陈说都是和个人经历相结合的,所以文章显得很有个性化,但却完全不失争辩力度。这样的理由段写作方法也是值得教学中让学生领会和尝试的。

  三,结束段中的个性化表达:

  在议论文写作中,结束段通常是观念的重申。许多学生由于表达方式的缺少,会觉得重述观念是一件比较困难的事,因而文章匆忙结束。而恰当参加个性化的思路表达,能够使文章的结束变得愈加生动。比方下面这段结束:People in the modern world are enjoying greater wealth but they are not as fit and active as they were in the past. What are the reasons? Suggest some measures to solve this problem.

  结束段着重坚持健康的重要性:

  I believe that all of us can imagine the daring consequences of living a life without a sound body. Therefore I decide to walk home instead of taking a taxi.

  再比方说这个G类的标题:

  Some people think it is better for people to change their career at least once in their life and do different kinds of jobs. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

  结束段再次重申应该换工作:

  I’ve had five jobs in the past fifteen years, but all in the same industry. Therefore, I’m always ready to take a brand-new career path. Or I’ll regret it later that I never try something different even once in my life. I believe the best is yet to come.

  总而言之,个性化的表达能够出现在文章的导言段、主体段和结束段,这些个性化的文字与传统说理争辩式言语一样,都能够到达清晰地提出或证明观念的意图。奇妙地运用这些个性化的言语和思路,能够使文章的争辩变得“和蔼可亲”且独具匠心。




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