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过错一:言语绝对化
依据能量守恒定律(Law of energy conservation),即“各种能量方式互相变换是有方向和条件约束的,能量相互变换时其量值不变,表明能量不能被发明或消灭”,人们在运用言语描绘事物变化时,应尽可能防止言语过于绝对化,尤其是在运用第二言语进行正式的书面表述时,更应该留意该言语中非绝对化表达方式的学习,这样才干尽显文章内容的客观性。
这是绝大多数中国考生在面临雅思写作时所忽视的,咱们能够比照如下两组语句:
This tends to occur whenever there is a downturn in commodity prices.
This occurs whenever there is a downturn in commodity prices.
A child learning a foreign language at primary school causes confusion between their native language and the foreign one.
A child learning a foreign language at primary school is likely to cause confusion between their native language and the foreign one.
为处理该问题,一些表达含蓄口气的用语和句式,考生能够测验运用,如:may, might, would, could, largely, possibly, probably, be likely (unlikely) to, be inclined to, tend to, to a large (some) extent, there is a higher probability/possibility that…等。
过错二: 只答复部分问题
An increasing number of people are moving and living in big cities. Why is this case? Is it a positive or negative trend? (2010年1月23日 G类) 该题有两个问题,许多考生在作答时忽视了第一问,只答复第二问,抑或是把第一问和该现象活跃的一面相提并论,如:
On the one hand, living in big cities brings about a considerable number of advantages, which is also why people move to big cities. Initially, it is undeniable that work conditions in big cities are usually better that those in countries and small cities. With more work opportunities and a higher level of salary, people in other places, especially the young, are inclined to move to big cities. Subsequently, not only does living in big cities offer people better work conditions, but also it affords dwellers with facilities of higher quality. These facilities, such as the premium hospitals and education resources, are extremely attractive to countryside people and those in small cities. (考生答卷)
该现象的原因应从大城市移民的视点考虑,如能够享用更好的日子设备,教育资源和就业机会等。而其活跃的一面应从城市居民或管理者的视点考虑,如大量的“移民”给城市带来了更多的劳动力和税收。
遇到此类考题,考生能够将全文分为四个阶段,除掉最初和结尾段,主体两个阶段别离答复一个问题,即第二段答复发生该现象的“原因”,第三段选取活跃或消沉任何一面展开论说。
过错三:简单跑题
该现象发生的原因主要是考生没有正确地了解标题,如Some people think that foreign tourists abroad should be charged more than local people to visit a country’s cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2011年4月30日A类)
就该题而言,许多考生将意思是“收费”的charged一词了解为“控制”,而该词是咱们在中学阶段就已经学习过的。这就很简单导致作文跑题,而跑题的作文分数为5分。
防止该问题,首要,在堆集词汇阶段,考生应连同其近义词精确记忆;其次,因为每年的考题重复率相对较高,所以,假如时刻答应,考生能够在操练阶段把近几年标题通读一遍,精确了解标题内容。
过错四:文章没有分段或分段不充分
雅思作文应按照论文的写作格局分段,即有最初段,结尾段和由两到三段构成的主体阶段。不论是四段式仍是五段式,考生只需进行合理的分段,就能满足考试在逻辑性方面的要求。
假如咱们能够在雅思写作考试的过程中防止上面所罗列的这些问题,咱们就能够在写作中达到最规范的格局和办法,当然假如有所创新和词汇,以及考试常识上堆集,咱们能够发挥的地步会更大一些,天然雅思写作成果也就进步许多。
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