雅思写作中全面回顾和最新趋势展望


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辛达雅思代报考位 :直到2017年3月22日上午雅思官网没有释放考位,在此提醒广大考生抓紧时间报名,注意自己的考试时间,如对雅思报名有任何疑问,欢迎咨询在线客服。  

目前正面临着所谓雅思考试的“变题期”,许多考生感到非常迷茫。为了帮助考生更加从容地应对未来几个月的考试,本文详细回顾了2016年9月后的雅思写作考试,总结出了一些明显的规律,从中分析了其发展的大体走势,希望这些规律和趋势能给广大考生带来有益的启迪。
  在学术类议论文中,十个月总共出现了24道考题,各类话题的分布较为分散,而最常见话题是"教育",占了6篇(1/4),其中有两篇是"教育"和"网络"的综合考题,其次是政府话题和犯罪话题,各占了4篇(1/6),有一篇是"大众媒体"和"犯罪"的综合考题,旧题和新题各占了2篇(1/12),其它话题占了6篇(1/4)。可见教育、政府、媒体和社会话题占主角。另一特点是写作主题呈现多元化的趋势,即开始考合成型的题目。此外,既有少数新题如"警察是否应该带?、和"如何消除现代人的自私和贪婪"等,还出现了两、三年以前的老话题,如"该不该拆除旧房子","政府是否投资空间探索"等。最后,试题仍然重考,上述考题中,亚太和欧洲地区最少出现1次,多的竟达5次,如"国际旅游业并没有带来人们之间的理解"。看来,虽然去年曾传言"9月份以后雅思考试将不会重复使用考卷",但事实证明使用"一次性"试卷的做法是缺乏根据的。因此,可以预见,未来的写作考试依然可能会出现试题重复的现象。在学术类图表作文中,最常见的四种图形为线形图、表格图、圆饼图和柱状图,值得注意的是,近期的几次考试中都出现了多图综合的趋势,如线形图和表格图的结合,线形图和柱状图的结合,连续在大陆出现后,仅在6月26日重复出现了一次,但需要引起考生的注意,尤其是在所谓雅思“变题期”出现几率较大。
  在移民类议论文中,以"教育"和"工作"为主题的考题占了绝大多数,其中前者重点考察内容是"业余兼职"、"学业压力"和"电脑游戏"三个方面,而后者则侧重于"职业薪金"、"缓解压力"和"择业标准"等。另外,新的话题,如国际婚姻的利弊,也需要引起考生的关注。最近有"复古"的题目出现,如"媒体该不该报道人们的私生活","是否该穿校服"和"是否该养宠物"等。在移民类的书信中,以"请求信"和"抱怨信"为主,其次是"寻找失物信"。再次是"道歉信"。
  总之,雅思写作考试考题仍然没有重大的变化,不外乎三种情况,一是过去大量旧题的翻版,二是老题的合成,三是有限的新题的出现。因此考生在备考雅思写作考试期间,首先应该熟悉以往考过的话题范围,有选择地加强训练,一旦遇到新题,洞察话题间的联系,看是否能从旧话题中得到启发,从而迅速确定写作思路。其次,密切关注考题的发展动态。一般说来,欧洲首次出现的写作考题,在大陆重考就为期不远了。建议考生务必全面提高自身写作能力,可以适当参考老师的预测范围,重点复习准备,力争做到"以不变应万变"。

一篇考雅思的学生发给我的作文,要求修改,里面出现的问题请各位注意!
  文章修改过程中用到了很多课上所讲的句式和表达,希望大家能够熟练使用和掌握!
  Topic:
  Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students how to judge right and wrong and how to behave well, some say that teachers should only teach students about academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
  原文:
  As a result of the responsibility of a teacher,One side argument is they orght to teach the students how to distinguish right and wrong and how to be a human being well.the other side view is they should solely teach students about academic konwledges.In the following paraguaphs I will discuss each argument.
  First,teaching konwledges is a initial responsibility of a teacher.they should make every student learned various konwledges and the methods of how to study. When the students are studying in the primary school,they do not know anything about different subjuct. A good teacher should have the ability of how to guide the students to study and improve the attention of students increasingly paying to the various subject.
  On the other hand, apart from academic knowledges the students also need other skills. It is necessary that the teacher taught the students how to realise everything of the society, such as teammork,uderstanding each other, helping someone when he or she needs, in addition,the teacher also need teach the students how to solre the problems they meet, and how to face the difficult time and so forth.
  In conclution,Teacher plays a significant role in Education of students. The academic knowledges and social skills were learned through the teachers. Thus, They should not only teach varions knowledges, but teach every social technologies as well.
  整体点评:
  原文问题包括: 
  1.简单的语法和表达错误
  2.论证过程逻辑混乱
  3.没有完成写作任务之中的:state personal view
  4.语言,尤其是句式的变化有待提高
  针对以上问题,建议:
  1. 在写作之前:按照课上多讲“先结构、后句式”的审题顺序将文章结构安排合理。
  2. 日常的写作练习中强化单句写作的能力:即,一种意思能用两种以上表达方式进行写作
  3. 写完整篇文章之后:务必检查:单复数、拼写等
  修改版:
  As to the responsibility of teachers, one argument is that they should solely teach students about academic subjects. While, the other view is that they ought to teach the students how to distinguish right from wrong, and how to be a human being well. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss the above opinions and state my personal view.
  (点评:所出现错误均为简单语法和拼写错误,还有句子衔接出现问题. 观点的顺序需要与下文顺序一致)
  People who hold the first view argue that teaching about academic subjects is an essential responsibility for any teacher. From their point of view, a qualified teacher should not only make every student acquire the knowledge, but also learn how to learn independently. Take students in the primary school as an example, most pupils do not know anything about their subjects. Therefore, a good teacher should have the ability to guide the students to study and inspire their interests on this field. Only in this way can students become independent in their future and further study.
  问题:首句为主题句,应言简意赅。之后应该就此深入展开。
  学习知识:acquire/gain knowledge 
  注意举例恰当:例子要支持自己的观点,是观点的展开
  On the other hand, others hold the opinion that apart from academic subjects, teachers need to teach students about how to tell right from wrong, and how to behave well. They believe that by doing so, students can easily adapt to the society where they may be confronted with various choices, including both the good and the bad. In class time, a teacher’s peoper behaviors, attitudes and comments on social issues will absolutely set good examples for students. Accordingly, students can develop their correct philosophy of life, and meantime they build up the indispensible quality, such as teamwork, tolerance, perserverence. In this way, the students can learn how to solve the problems they meet, and how to face the difficult time and so forth.
  3段:采用总分总结构阐述第二个观点:注意观点的安排上,赞成的观点一般放在后面且论述稍长。
  Taking into account the above analysis, I prefer the second view. What makes me convinced is that the ultimate goal of education is to server the development of the society. From my point of view, only those people, who are quipped with not only knowledge, but proper behavior and the ability to tell right from wrong, can shoulder the responsibility of constructing society.
  文章尾段完成任务:总结上文,表明自己观点,简要说明原因。



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